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Atop the Mountain

_ __ ___ Overwhelmed in webs of silken light with crystal dew dripping beneath each hue of azure, emerald and citrine melt amongst the tree's For worry, has now gone, replaced with colored strands surreal breaths of enchantment, as I reach for felicities hand A soul of liberation, a thought to ponder within.... for my poetic song I have abandoned, to fly silent across the land ___ __ _

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/25/2011 12:25:00 PM
overwhelmed,,Rick... how are you this morning , Now that the presents are wrapped, the stockings all hung, all that's left now is the holiday fun! Merry Christmas! (Dr Seuss) , wishing you the best this coming year.. i'm gonna enjoy all the blessings this coming year ,it's mine for the taking... ;-) ,bless you always,..p.d
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Date: 12/21/2011 1:05:00 PM
This is scary good. Excellent job with the visualization.
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Date: 12/21/2011 1:00:00 PM
I feel a softness in your words. As though you are at peace ^Rick. Just takes my breath away with the realization of it's stillness. Blessings to you. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2011 12:49:00 PM
What a soothing piece.
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