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Atonement

........Lightening bolt.........


................ash...............

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Doris Culverhouse

February 17, 2010 at 5:22 PM

whoa, sounds like somebody got zapped!! could be? congrats on the win!!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

February 16, 2010 at 6:01 AM

Congratulations Jeralynn, on your Honorable Mention in the “SPACES” poetry contest sponsored by: Brian Strand with these "striking" words. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

February 14, 2010 at 8:45 AM

GOOD, you made the list, Jeralynn. Congrats!!

Connie Marcum Wong

February 13, 2010 at 4:43 AM

Jeralynn, Perfect! I am so glad to see it a winner. Congratulations! Connie

Audrey Haick

February 11, 2010 at 7:41 PM

Wow! This is great, Jeralyn! My congratulations on your win in Brian's "Spaces" Contest! Peace and love, Audrey

February 11, 2010 at 4:16 PM

Creative and visually interesting approach to this form. Just three words say so much. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

James Fraser

February 11, 2010 at 1:24 PM

Short, but leaves images aplenty in this fine piece, many congratulations on your success in Brian's fine contest Jeralynn >> James

Mac Mcgovern

February 11, 2010 at 10:47 AM

Conratulations on your win. For us desiring cremation, it is cheaper. Mac

Joyce Johnson

February 11, 2010 at 10:38 AM

Congratulations. So much in so few. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 11, 2010 at 8:33 AM

Congrats on your winning poem in the Spaces contest.. an amazing write for an amazing win.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carrie Richards

February 11, 2010 at 8:05 AM

Oh my....how did I miss this amazing poem?? Great job, Jeralynn!! Congratulations on this meaningful poem, said in three words! Wow! Love, Carrie

Robert A. Dufresne

February 11, 2010 at 5:14 AM

yesiree Jeralynn!! lol . I will always remember this one! Congratulations on both counts! Love it ! heehheee!-Robert

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 11, 2010 at 3:28 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's Contest Jeralynn. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

February 11, 2010 at 2:39 AM

I love the irony in the title. Great imagism, Jeralynn. Congratulations on your success! Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno

February 11, 2010 at 1:30 AM

Jeralynn, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul

Brian Strand

February 11, 2010 at 12:46 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Jeralyn.Rgds Brian.My latest contest 'SPORT'S MAD ?' is now open.

Colleen Bono

February 8, 2010 at 7:33 PM

Nice one.Please read IT"S A BOY.I have been a little busy the last few days.When you read my letter you will know why.Hope all is well with you.

Sara Kendrick

February 7, 2010 at 3:46 PM

Great Imagism for I could go all kinds of ways with this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. If this ifor the contest it should do well. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara