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Atom Vs Adam

Did God create the oceans dry His forests without greenery to declare?~ Obviously not! As every overhead cloud bears proud witness, and every raindrop can claim a rightful lush share: We are partners all, in nature; each for Mother's Pleasure made... each with a starring role – but only her man, using one finger of a hand can turn countless plush gardens into blazes of Classic Hell. With just one downward thrust, of his fallen hand, trillions of atoms will collide and devastatingly expel death...a blinding flash of sin First Adam began with spiritual division, that modern Adam has perpetuated by splitting atoms into disintegrating parts~ soon to split his entire world into lifeless remains while stridently blaming some scapegoat she-devil for our own destructive hearts.

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Date: 12/13/2022 1:18:00 PM
Seasons' Satisfaction, Joe. - your Atom and Adam poem is holds a fair and logical perspective, - wrapped in succinct, entertaining form. It was provoking and consoling for me.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 12/16/2022 3:59:00 PM
Thank you, Sigrid; I don't start with a plan when beginning a new work; I just sort of jot down quickly random thoughts as they enter my mind; and when something comes out that I think is interesting enough to be expanded -- that's what I do. So pleased when it turns out well enough for others to also enjoy. Blessings!
Date: 10/21/2022 12:03:00 PM
Hmm I have a thought.? A take on the breaking Seals in revelations.' Could that be about the Splitting of atoms.' They are life's building blocks Some say, is it sacrilegious to break them.? I have my thoughts on this; Joe.'
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/22/2022 10:11:00 AM
Thank you, Joe; interesting idea...definitely worth exploring. I, for one, would enjoy reading such a work. Blessings my friend!

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