Atmospheric Pressure

Storm clouds gathered in the skies Swirling angrily and anxious For the war Brewing somber colors Not swept away by the mighty wind. Finally, holding off no longer, They exploded in a crash of thunder As lightning lashed out in pain. The tension was relieved While the torrential downpour flowed Like an avalanche of tears, And washed the dusty air. Then, as if by magic, When the last drop of rain was shed, The aurora of sun embraced the sky And kissed it softly with a rainbow To fade the ashen gloom. As my tears dissolve our storm Hug me with your sunshine Of understanding love And let the rainbow of our kiss Paint away the hurt. February 16, 2015 ~1st Place~ Contest: Impact and Metaphors Sponsor: William Kekaula Judged: 10/03/2020
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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 3:25 PM
An exquisite twist of circumstance, Sandra, dramatic depiction precedes thoroughly, blessings on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
Gauthier Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 10:42 PM
Sandra, this is a lovely poem. Congrats on your most deserved win.
Haight Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Thank you again, Line! I so much appreciate your visits and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra
Wolf Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 2:08 PM
Wonderful imagery. Lovely thoughts. Magical poem. A well-deserved winner, Sandra! :) Gershon
Haight Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 7:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon, for your visit and very supportive comments! Sandra :)
Pett Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 7:24 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Sandra, excellent poetry so well written. :))
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 11:30 PM
Congratulations, Sandra. The winning poem touches the heart.
Krampe Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 8:36 PM
Beautiful imagery! Congrats on your placement.
Scars Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 10:08 AM
wow, loved this one Sandra, prob my fav in the contest :) congrats :)-luloo
Nusker Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 4:08 AM
Wonderfully described. Congrats on your win. A 7 & a fav.
Lindley Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 4:02 PM
After the powerful storm comes the sunshine and renewed hope! Your poem encompasses Nature's power into human emotion, spirit and interaction. Congrats on a fine write and great win my friend!!
Haight Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 9:14 AM
Thank you for your very supportive and uplifting comment and congrats, Robert. Sandra
Tor Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 9:24 AM
The Storm is a wonderful poem Sandra. Love this one.
Haight Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 9:15 AM
Thank you, Michael, for your supportive comment. Sandra
A  Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 2:12 AM
SANDRA, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smiles & Joy **SKAT**
Haight Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 9:15 AM
Thank you, Skat. Hugs, Sandra
A. Sharma Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 1:49 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this lovely write Sandra!
Haight Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 9:16 AM
Thank you so much, Dr. Upma. Hugs, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 12:41 AM
Congratulations! I really like this, very descriptive and tender.
Haight Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 9:16 AM
Thank you so much, Susan. Hugs, Sandra
Callus Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 9:15 AM
A lovely and expressive poem in free verse that overflows with delightful imagery. Well done and congratulations, Sandra! // paul
A  Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 7:44 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 4:58 PM
wow, I love the deeper meaning inside this one as well, Sandra.awesome poem. Congrats on a very well deserved win.
A   Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 2:46 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your "Aurora And Avalanche" win.... LINDA
May Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 10:30 PM
Congrats on a fine win Sandra
Roper Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 1:55 PM
Very beautiful as always Sandra, your discriptive abilities are marvelous a 7! Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve
Haight Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 3:41 PM
Hi Eve, thank you for the visit to my poem. I appreciate your beautiful and positive comments and rating, as well as your congrats! Thanks again, Hugs, Sandra
Nunez Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 10:30 AM
Had to come back for the 7...hehe. :) :)
Nunez Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 10:29 AM
Beautiful! Awesome imagery, Sandra. You have a way with words few can achieve. Congratulations on your fine win! HUgs and smiles. Kim :) :)
Haight Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 3:40 PM
Hi Kim, again, I appreciate your wonderful, encouraging comments and rating support. Thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Guzzi Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 8:26 AM
Sandra your content is always so lovely, try to use modern puctuation & capitalizat & only capitalize the beginning of a sentence. OH, also take a pass at this poem moving it into present tense, it will bring the reader closer to the beauty & the storm. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Haight Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 3:38 PM
Thank you for the visit, nice comment and congratulations, Debbie. Also, I do appreciate your expert suggestions and will try to implement them! Thanks again, Hugs, Sandra
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 12:32 AM
Incredible imagery and amazing metaphors! There's not a poem you write that I don't love, Sandra. I'm sure I have you on My favorite poets list already, but if I don't, I'm adding you now...hugs :)) Rhonda
Haight Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 4:04 PM
Hi Rhonda, thank you so much for your support and encouraging comments. I always appreciate receiving them. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 1:43 PM
Wonderful flow and the imagery is awesome Sandra - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
Haight Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 2:59 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much. I always appreciate how supportive you are. Hugs, Sandra
Pinet Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 1:33 PM
Your expressive and descriptive words sound good and paint a many colored canvas of sights and sounds that the reader can easily relate to. Well done. Emile. #7
Haight Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 2:59 PM
Thank you, Emile. Your comments are so much appreciated as well as your support with the 7. Sandra
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