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Atmospheric Pressure

Storm clouds gathered in the skies Swirling angrily and anxious For the war Brewing somber colors Not swept away by the mighty wind. Finally, holding off no longer, They exploded in a crash of thunder As lightning lashed out in pain. The tension was relieved While the torrential downpour flowed Like an avalanche of tears, And washed the dusty air. Then, as if by magic, When the last drop of rain was shed, The aurora of sun embraced the sky And kissed it softly with a rainbow To fade the ashen gloom. As my tears dissolve our storm Hug me with your sunshine Of understanding love And let the rainbow of our kiss Paint away the hurt. February 16, 2015 ~1st Place~ Contest: Impact and Metaphors Sponsor: William Kekaula Judged: 10/03/2020

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Date: 10/3/2020 3:25:00 PM
An exquisite twist of circumstance, Sandra, dramatic depiction precedes thoroughly, blessings on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Date: 2/23/2018 10:42:00 PM
Sandra, this is a lovely poem. Congrats on your most deserved win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/25/2018 7:01:00 PM
Thank you again, Line! I so much appreciate your visits and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/23/2018 2:08:00 PM
Wonderful imagery. Lovely thoughts. Magical poem. A well-deserved winner, Sandra! :) Gershon
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/25/2018 7:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon, for your visit and very supportive comments! Sandra :)
Date: 9/5/2017 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Sandra, excellent poetry so well written. :))
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Date: 9/4/2017 11:30:00 PM
Congratulations, Sandra. The winning poem touches the heart.
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Date: 1/25/2017 8:36:00 PM
Beautiful imagery! Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 1/24/2017 10:08:00 AM
wow, loved this one Sandra, prob my fav in the contest :) congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/24/2017 4:08:00 AM
Wonderfully described. Congrats on your win. A 7 & a fav.
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Date: 12/24/2015 4:02:00 PM
After the powerful storm comes the sunshine and renewed hope! Your poem encompasses Nature's power into human emotion, spirit and interaction. Congrats on a fine write and great win my friend!!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/26/2015 9:14:00 AM
Thank you for your very supportive and uplifting comment and congrats, Robert. Sandra
Date: 12/24/2015 9:24:00 AM
The Storm is a wonderful poem Sandra. Love this one.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/26/2015 9:15:00 AM
Thank you, Michael, for your supportive comment. Sandra
Date: 12/24/2015 2:12:00 AM
SANDRA, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smiles & Joy **SKAT**
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/26/2015 9:15:00 AM
Thank you, Skat. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/24/2015 1:49:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this lovely write Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/26/2015 9:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dr. Upma. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/24/2015 12:41:00 AM
Congratulations! I really like this, very descriptive and tender.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/26/2015 9:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/6/2015 9:15:00 AM
A lovely and expressive poem in free verse that overflows with delightful imagery. Well done and congratulations, Sandra! // paul
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Date: 4/30/2015 7:44:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 4/28/2015 4:58:00 PM
wow, I love the deeper meaning inside this one as well, Sandra.awesome poem. Congrats on a very well deserved win.
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Date: 4/28/2015 2:46:00 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your "Aurora And Avalanche" win.... LINDA
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Date: 4/27/2015 10:30:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Sandra
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Date: 4/27/2015 1:55:00 PM
Very beautiful as always Sandra, your discriptive abilities are marvelous a 7! Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/27/2015 3:41:00 PM
Hi Eve, thank you for the visit to my poem. I appreciate your beautiful and positive comments and rating, as well as your congrats! Thanks again, Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/27/2015 10:30:00 AM
Had to come back for the 7...hehe. :) :)
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Date: 4/27/2015 10:29:00 AM
Beautiful! Awesome imagery, Sandra. You have a way with words few can achieve. Congratulations on your fine win! HUgs and smiles. Kim :) :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/27/2015 3:40:00 PM
Hi Kim, again, I appreciate your wonderful, encouraging comments and rating support. Thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/27/2015 8:26:00 AM
Sandra your content is always so lovely, try to use modern puctuation & capitalizat & only capitalize the beginning of a sentence. OH, also take a pass at this poem moving it into present tense, it will bring the reader closer to the beauty & the storm. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/27/2015 3:38:00 PM
Thank you for the visit, nice comment and congratulations, Debbie. Also, I do appreciate your expert suggestions and will try to implement them! Thanks again, Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/18/2015 12:32:00 AM
Incredible imagery and amazing metaphors! There's not a poem you write that I don't love, Sandra. I'm sure I have you on My favorite poets list already, but if I don't, I'm adding you now...hugs :)) Rhonda
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/18/2015 4:04:00 PM
Hi Rhonda, thank you so much for your support and encouraging comments. I always appreciate receiving them. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/16/2015 1:43:00 PM
Wonderful flow and the imagery is awesome Sandra - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/16/2015 2:59:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much. I always appreciate how supportive you are. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/16/2015 1:33:00 PM
Your expressive and descriptive words sound good and paint a many colored canvas of sights and sounds that the reader can easily relate to. Well done. Emile. #7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/16/2015 2:59:00 PM
Thank you, Emile. Your comments are so much appreciated as well as your support with the 7. Sandra
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