Atacama / English Version

Atacama, Eden of winds,
flower of abandoned rocks and of sapleter,
homestead of flamingoes and geysers,
and above all ,
below an azure sky,
mountains are carrying on their tops 
ice of the past.

Old villages tell us their stories,
Toconce, Toconao, Chiu-Chiu, 
carry in their canons
life,
water from  deep below
let flowers and vegetables grow.


Chiu-Chiu, oasis of the desert,
a green spot,
surrounded by fragments of history
with the colour of orange, red and brown,
embedded in fragile foam of salt and hope,
the history of the Atacama.
Still alive in their churches.
Fragments of an ancient culture
reflecting on the surface of Río Loa.


Like ants – far away,
dispersed in vibrant light
some Vicuñas are looking
for tranquility and forage.
The geysers of  El Tatio
send their hot water into the cold and pure air.


How pacient the Atacama is with us,
slaves of modern times
with the desire for paradise
with the dual face of history and hope.
Salar de Atacama, show me your 
cracked and wounded face,
your wrinkles of solitude.


Far in the distance the chain of volcanoes,
with towering  Lincancabur,  
and its shouldered knapsack of crystals and ice,
holding its splendour towards the sky
with the colours of lapis lazuli and  light agate.
Toconao, the ruins of  Quitor greet you,
dormant since ages
they narrate the history of the Inca,
of their last refuge and their last battle with
Pedro de Valdivia,
who came with his men
to break the bravery of Inca soldiers
with thunder and destruction.

The waterfalls of the hot spings of Puritama
shoot their water into the air with the colours of rainbows,
drawing delicate faces of life
on dry sand and charming stones.
The wind from the mountains carries songs,
flute music, ancient tunes,
stories of salt, gypsum and clay
to the Valle de la Luna,
to let it remain calm and unchanged
with its eyes filled with dust and stones
in the eternal canto of earth.

Atacama, heart of the North,
plant of wind
in the song of history,
you make the day sound
and rock to sleep the nights,
lonely between the arms of the mountains
and the Altiplano.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/8/2009 6:32:00 AM
Gert, I was unable to send soupmail. Here's what I wanted to say. Many poets are contributing to a "Thanksgiving" poem called Our Many Blessings. If you would like to contribute, email or soupmail 2 lines 13-15 syllables each with either end or inside rhyme, about something that you are thankful for. I will compile and post the poem on or before Thanksgiving. (Please also pass this information along.) Lovingly, Dane Ann Daneann@aol.com
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Date: 11/8/2009 6:20:00 AM
Oh Gert, these wondrous words are rich with the beauty of life, both past and present, framed by God's glorious creations. Your imagery is perfect. I felt great emotion weld up inside my being, almost to tears of joy, as I read this English version of your poem. Thank you for sharing your talents. Lovingly, Dane Ann Soupmail
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Date: 11/7/2009 5:16:00 AM
Hi Gert! I love this poem! especially the last stanza! jimbo
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Date: 11/6/2009 12:33:00 PM
Interesting and educational write. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/6/2009 12:33:00 PM
Interesting and educational write. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/6/2009 10:52:00 AM
Gert, i very much doubt i will see another piece like this on the Soup for quite some time. And it would have to be ever so special to capture the descriptive images you have given readers here, its quite a write and it's been an absolute joy to read. It is now filed under favorites on my Soup account where it shall remain >> James
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Date: 11/6/2009 10:16:00 AM
Gert, I will suggest to James F. that he read this poem. He'll love it, too!
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Date: 11/5/2009 9:22:00 AM
Your excellent poetry was a joy to read today Gert. I am wishing you a fun filled inspiring day. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/4/2009 3:14:00 PM
Lovely descriptive poem Gert. I really enjoyed reading it. Pam.
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Date: 11/4/2009 8:28:00 AM
Pretty good poem.
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Date: 11/4/2009 8:10:00 AM
Hi Gert, Think you've outdone yourself here. Excellent writing bringing to life the ancient culture of the Incus with the perfect mix of poetic meaning. You put time into this one and it shows! Bravo. Take care my friend. Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/4/2009 7:55:00 AM
I love the way you brought to life the ancient culture of the Incas in this write. And it's so beautifully written. Surely one for my favorites, Gert. James Fraser would love this as well -- we both enjoy historical writes and yours is awesome! Love, Carolyn
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