Andrea Dietrich Poet Cinquain

At Times

at times

            grey clouds d
                                     e
                                         s
                                            c
                                               end

       and life rains
                          down 
                                   on
                                         me . . .

        you are not here; 
                    I am left with
                                 only
                       longing

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Howard Kerr May 23, 2025 at 8:39 AM Magnificent, sincere, evocative, heartfelt piece. Congratulations Howard

Janice Canerdy May 21, 2025 at 8:06 PM Andrea, CONGRATS on your win with this creative piece. Janice

Krishnanand Guptar May 21, 2025 at 9:24 AM Congratulations dear poetess on your high placement in this contest with a pleasant write drawn from a fertile mind and tender heart. Wish you a pleasant day.

Maclawrence Famuyiwa May 21, 2025 at 9:16 AM Nice. I really like this. Congrats.

Howard Kerr May 21, 2025 at 12:20 AM Congratulations Andrea, on your winning placement with this poignant, heartfelt Cinquain. I’m also impressed by its apt design. Howard

Ranaditya Adhikary January 9, 2023 at 12:49 AM Hope your longing blooms into flowers of reality... Congratulations on your win:-)

Sara Kendrick December 29, 2022 at 4:28 AM Enjoyed reading this one. No sure what or whom it is about, but it is spiced with emotion. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Arlo Parker December 28, 2022 at 10:23 PM Winged Warrior, Carolyn, Connie, Rico, Milt...tuff year. :o/