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At the Zoo - very crude Premiere Contest Winner

He heard that the zoo was for sale; a donkey and tiger he'd 'nail': 'I want' - to the lass - 'your pussy and ass!' (And that's why he's banged up in jail...)

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Date: 8/29/2024 4:49:00 PM
Hahaha! Dear Jack, a risky and risqué limerick! Your clever pen got the crude fourth line through with ease. Your rapier wit is on grand display my friend. Congratulations for your wonderful trophy win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/26/2024 1:09:00 AM
Hi Jack very clever limerick and tres risque but an absolute scream - Congrats on your top win my friend! Blesisngs, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/21/2024 3:28:00 AM
Talk about laugh jack - poetic brilliance lol I creased up reading this gem - hmmmmmm I wish I'd thought of going bawdy for the prompt lol . MANY congrats! hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/19/2024 7:19:00 PM
congratulations. happy writing.
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Date: 7/18/2024 9:44:00 PM
lol...you got out of this wordwreck scot free...huge congrats on your top win, jack...you wit shines!
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Date: 7/18/2024 1:02:00 PM
congrats, my friend. How are you doing? Did I forget to return an email?
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Date: 7/18/2024 9:23:00 AM
Wow... and I thought mine was risky! It is very clever! Good job on your win!
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Date: 7/18/2024 9:08:00 AM
Yikes! "Very crude," indeed. Congratulations on your win, Jack.
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Date: 7/18/2024 2:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. I see I did not place, and I usually don't comment if I don't place, but I thought I would return to comment on your work. Sara K
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Date: 7/18/2024 1:40:00 AM
Very clever, congratulations!
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Date: 7/17/2024 5:03:00 PM
Hmmmm...
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Date: 7/17/2024 2:52:00 PM
Only those who dare can hope to achieve lol :) Congratulations on your top placement, Jack!! Regards // paul
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Date: 7/14/2024 8:40:00 PM
Haha. You got away with both words. If I had tried this, they'd have x'd out the two choice words
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Date: 7/13/2024 2:36:00 PM
Yes, quite crude but it could be a good contender because it is unique. Thanks for dropping by my pages. Sara K
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