At the State Fair

Upon learning that pork rhymes with pitchfork
                                                  ~ Clem's pig did a frantic jig




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Kingston Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 9:03 PM
This was so funny. This poor piggy needed Charlotte, his old friend in the barn with 8 legs! I'm quite sure Mr. White would agree.
Peck Avatar
August 24, 2022 at 4:29 PM
Cute monoku (poor piggie)
Tor Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 2:10 PM
Lol Gershon you had me laughing. I was going to take some time off but miss you and Miltons Poetry have to at least see a few. This one I enjoyed lol. God bless you..Ps I found out that Ben Carson who ran for president did the surgery on Beth the story I did on Mister Rogers. Small world my friend, had to share that with you, before I'd forget...
Wolf Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 8:47 PM
It's a small world after all, as Disneyland says. Thanks for sharing this one, Michael.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 10:21 AM
Are you sure you are not from Iowa also?
Wolf Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 8:46 PM
Actually, I've never set foot in Iowa!... State Fairs in Illinois and Indiana are the only ones I've attended.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 7:30 AM
LOL…watch out pig…they are heating up the barbecue!
Wolf Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 8:46 PM
Pigs need ombudsmen.
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