Notes About The Poem

At the Pond

I fritter my time away as I sat on a bench.
In front of me was a large pond with an alcove
Where three upside dolphins spout water
To keep the pond full of green filtered liquid.

The water trickle reminds me of the sound of silence.
But silence all around there was none; for hear
Red Bunting, plovers and others fly here and there.
Whilst in the shallow part of the pond, ducks waddle along.

Fascinated I admire the lotus plants in the water
As yellow and red flowers adorn the flat green leaves.
Food is abundant since flies, dragonflies and insects
Provide the animal kingdom with plenty to eat.

It was a warm evening and soon all went to rest
I soon felt drowsy as the trickle of water was so melodious.
But light sleep was not for me it seems as if a shadow fell on me.
I woke as her lips brushed softly on my own.  I was full of glee.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2022 at 7:30 AM
The water trickle reminds me of the sound of silence. & I woke as her lips brushed softly on my own. - love that you share your romance, your openness for surely my dad feels these stirrings often (of His departed love too) You are a master of nature and the sea. You are a lovely poet, my dear friend!
Skelly Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 7:10 AM
Such a nice piece you have penned Victor....Delice
Edmonds  Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 8:30 AM
A lovely scenario at the edge of the pool Victor, serene and romantic too. The brush of lips, a beautiful awakening… Belle
Legros Kelley Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 1:09 AM
How incredibly romantic and beautiful Victor, so very sweet!
Andresen Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 1:28 PM
- A lovely poem, Victor...a romantic setting in a beautiful place :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2022 at 8:55 PM
Very endearing my friend.
Buehler Avatar
September 17, 2022 at 11:51 AM
What a deliciously romantic ending, to a beautiful, tranquil day at the pond! Very nicely written, Victor. Best wishes, Evelyn :)
Kendrick Avatar
September 17, 2022 at 10:45 AM
Ahh!! Romantic work. I enjoyed reading your descriptive and expressive work about the pond. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Fowler Avatar
September 17, 2022 at 9:29 AM
Softly gentle and sensual Victor! Linda
George Avatar
September 17, 2022 at 8:32 AM
Lovely scenes of birds and flowers around to delight the sense of sight and romantic feel of lips to delight the sense of touch. I wish I could rest on the bank of such a pond with water lilies growing in plenty.
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2022 at 7:42 PM
very nice Victor. My comments don't seem to be going through. I have no idea what is going on. Is it Soup or is it my internet? Let's see if this goes through
Buhagiar Avatar
September 17, 2022 at 3:41 AM
both.
Lawless Avatar
September 16, 2022 at 5:41 PM
the hush of Mother Nature's kiss on the winds of thanks. Beautifully written Victor it brought me to the edge of that pond with you.
Anaya Avatar
September 16, 2022 at 2:04 PM
Awe, a kiss is just a kiss, until you put it to a poem. This is so nice, surreal!
Poet Avatar
September 16, 2022 at 11:55 AM
Victor, you have successfully brought the audience to the calm and serenity of natural context. It should be no surprise that passion also blooms with blossoms. A work of wizardry. Great Job.
Cunningham Avatar
September 16, 2022 at 8:35 AM
A lovely setting for a romantic encounter Victor. Tom
Pandit Avatar
September 16, 2022 at 5:24 AM
You took the reader on a ride to peace and tranquility of nature, Victor. No wonder romance too blooms with lotus flowers. A magical write.
Tor Avatar
September 16, 2022 at 3:48 AM
What a surreal experience you shared in this lovely write of yours Victor a favorite for me my friend...
M  Avatar
September 16, 2022 at 2:17 AM
Victor the King of Romance! Another lovely romantic poem my friend! Debx
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace