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I fritter my time away as I sat on a bench. In front of me was a large pond with an alcove Where three upside dolphins spout water To keep the pond full of green filtered liquid. The water trickle reminds me of the sound of silence. But silence all around there was none; for hear Red Bunting, plovers and others fly here and there. Whilst in the shallow part of the pond, ducks waddle along. Fascinated I admire the lotus plants in the water As yellow and red flowers adorn the flat green leaves. Food is abundant since flies, dragonflies and insects Provide the animal kingdom with plenty to eat. It was a warm evening and soon all went to rest I soon felt drowsy as the trickle of water was so melodious. But light sleep was not for me it seems as if a shadow fell on me. I woke as her lips brushed softly on my own. I was full of glee.

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Date: 9/22/2022 7:30:00 AM
The water trickle reminds me of the sound of silence. & I woke as her lips brushed softly on my own. - love that you share your romance, your openness for surely my dad feels these stirrings often (of His departed love too) You are a master of nature and the sea. You are a lovely poet, my dear friend!
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Date: 9/21/2022 7:10:00 AM
Such a nice piece you have penned Victor....Delice
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Date: 9/19/2022 8:30:00 AM
A lovely scenario at the edge of the pool Victor, serene and romantic too. The brush of lips, a beautiful awakening… Belle
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Date: 9/19/2022 1:09:00 AM
How incredibly romantic and beautiful Victor, so very sweet!
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Date: 9/18/2022 1:28:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Victor...a romantic setting in a beautiful place :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/17/2022 8:55:00 PM
Very endearing my friend.
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Date: 9/17/2022 11:51:00 AM
What a deliciously romantic ending, to a beautiful, tranquil day at the pond! Very nicely written, Victor. Best wishes, Evelyn :)
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Date: 9/17/2022 10:45:00 AM
Ahh!! Romantic work. I enjoyed reading your descriptive and expressive work about the pond. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 9/17/2022 9:29:00 AM
Softly gentle and sensual Victor! Linda
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Date: 9/17/2022 8:32:00 AM
Lovely scenes of birds and flowers around to delight the sense of sight and romantic feel of lips to delight the sense of touch. I wish I could rest on the bank of such a pond with water lilies growing in plenty.
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Date: 9/16/2022 7:42:00 PM
very nice Victor. My comments don't seem to be going through. I have no idea what is going on. Is it Soup or is it my internet? Let's see if this goes through
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Date: 9/17/2022 3:41:00 AM
both.
Date: 9/16/2022 5:41:00 PM
the hush of Mother Nature's kiss on the winds of thanks. Beautifully written Victor it brought me to the edge of that pond with you.
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Date: 9/16/2022 2:04:00 PM
Awe, a kiss is just a kiss, until you put it to a poem. This is so nice, surreal!
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Date: 9/16/2022 11:55:00 AM
Victor, you have successfully brought the audience to the calm and serenity of natural context. It should be no surprise that passion also blooms with blossoms. A work of wizardry. Great Job.
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Date: 9/16/2022 8:35:00 AM
A lovely setting for a romantic encounter Victor. Tom
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Date: 9/16/2022 5:24:00 AM
You took the reader on a ride to peace and tranquility of nature, Victor. No wonder romance too blooms with lotus flowers. A magical write.
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Date: 9/16/2022 3:48:00 AM
What a surreal experience you shared in this lovely write of yours Victor a favorite for me my friend...
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Date: 9/16/2022 2:17:00 AM
Victor the King of Romance! Another lovely romantic poem my friend! Debx
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