At the Pharmacy

There was a long queue at the pharmacy.
It was not easy to wait in the summer heat.
The air conditioner could not cope enough.

The three young and comely chemists were efficient,
Still there were so many people waiting.
But I needed the medication, blast it.

Under the soft hum of fluorescent light,
the drugstore was too full.
The air smelt faintly of disinfectant,
Too clean for comfort.
Still the chemists worked hard and smiled.

Behind the counter,
Bottles and packets were chosen and packed.
The bells of the cash register chimed fast.
Sick people were served, some with an occasional cough.
Change was given, cards were swiped.

Finally, my turn arrived.  I grimmed.
“Get me some arsenic.  I’m tired of waiting.”
With a laugh, my friendly chemist 
Handed me some pain killers.
“Have a nice day, my dear friend.”
I smiled, stuck my tongue out and dared the summer heat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Jones Avatar
April 27, 2026 at 7:34 PM
lol! Engaging. So glad you didn’t get arsenic!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 27, 2026 at 3:28 AM
Love your wry humor! Hugs
Roper Avatar
April 25, 2026 at 6:07 PM
I hate waiting. But do I dare stick out my tongue. I really would be laughed at. Good verse Victor. I enjoyed reading.
Greenhough Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 7:26 AM
Lol I love this. I once changed Pharmacies for just this reason. The staff and customers held everyone up with small talk. So I left. I hope your pain is gone.
Singh Avatar
April 24, 2026 at 3:45 AM
Although painful while waiting refreshed and relaxed after the wait ended.Very well penned.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
April 23, 2026 at 4:45 PM
love the humor....I detest the long lines at our pharmacy.
Kitchin Avatar
April 23, 2026 at 3:55 PM
Victor, so well penned. Waiting at the pharmacy is never fun. I just went through this getting meds for my husband. I had to return to the store due to the pharmacy being closed for lunch. There was a long line upon my return. Such relatable poem.
Empress Avatar
April 23, 2026 at 9:17 AM
Ah i hate waiting in lines, patience is not really my thing, haha. I absolutely love the detailed imagery and storytelling throughout here dear victor! You truly are such a versatile poet! You can write on any theme and nail it! And leave us readers in awe of how you deliver your lines so rhythmically and in such an engaging manner! The ending made me smile. Haha! It must be very hot there? Hope the weather is nice. Pleasure reading you today. Sending you light always
Kendrick Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 4:19 PM
Good one, Victor. I was able to get a chuckle or two out of it. Thank you for sharing it with us. Way to go. Sara K
Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 12:08 PM
This was so fun to read. Love the arsenic line. I hope you stuck your tongue out at the pharmacist!
Sands Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 10:14 AM
You describe it well Victor. No fun waiting there with that smell in the heat. Funny ending. :)
Ball Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 9:09 AM
This is cute Victor. Could see you standing in line wanting to be anywhere else. As always a good write with great imagery. God Bless, JB
Cunningham Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 1:23 AM
Nothing worse than having to queue in that stifling heat, bet you couldn't wait to get out.. Tom
Buehler Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 8:38 PM
A joke and a smile, and annoyance is forgotten. I love this pleasant tale and the happy ending, Victor. Nice work! :)
Sheehan Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 7:30 PM
Nice write. I got a good laugh from it. Wonderfully composed.
Hind Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 4:04 PM
LOL
Anaya Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 10:45 AM
Clinical smells always a turn-away and come back another time. I laughed, such a great end to a long wait, Victor. I really related to this one. April's blessings
Goldsmith Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 10:18 AM
I enjoyed reading. What a Fun ending. Waiting is no fun, even harder in the hot summer heat. Have a wonderful day writing away............
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