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At the Footbridge

At The Footbridge At the footbridge here in sight, although it's now the dark of night, within this time of dimmest light what's there beyond is such a fright. That place unknown in some way might be worse than where I stand tonight. So is it wrong or is it right to cross this footbridge to that site? This tough dilemma does invite an urge for me to just sit tight. I know to stay will not ignite my inner fear; but then in spite of dread beyond this footbridge plight, new ventures lie which might incite a turn in life that may delight... So off I step...misgivings, fight. Sandra M. Haight ~3rd Place~ Contest: I Got Zero, Nothing, Nada- 2 Sponsor: Broken Wings Judged: 08/03/2016 ~NA~ Premiere Contest: At The Footbridge Sponsor: Julia Ward Judged: 07/26/2016
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Roper Avatar
August 4, 2016 at 10:44 PM
Sandra, Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Smith Avatar
August 4, 2016 at 7:40 AM
Well done Sandra, deserving honor in both contests...
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 11:13 PM
Wonderful and well said it reflect our fear to venture in life... Congrats Sandra. :) Sunita
Medders Tobechi Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 11:11 PM
Congratulations, Sandra. This poem deserved recognition. Well written.
Canerdy Avatar
August 3, 2016 at 10:48 PM
Excellent poem about our natural fear of and attraction to the unknown. Congrats on your win, Sandra! Janice
Arnone Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 10:21 AM
Nice fairytale monorhyme, Andrea. I was glad you took that final step. :-)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 2:26 PM
A 7 all the way.....
Haight Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 5:19 PM
Thank you, Janis. I really appreciate your wonderful support and appreciate the nice 7! Hugs, Sandra
Devnath  Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 1:00 PM
Beautifully ended from first to last. Congrats on your superb win, my friend. A 7. Loved always, bl
Haight Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 5:20 PM
Thank you, BL, for your supportive comment and 7 rating. However, it only looks like I had a trophy win, but if you read Julia's blog, and the updated winner's list, you will see that Poetry Soup made a mistake on contest results, and my poem actually did not place!!! :( Sandra
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 11:47 AM
Well penned, Sandra and Congratulations on your premier win
Haight Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Thank you, Janis...it only looks like I had a trophy win, but if you read Julia's blog, Poetry Soup made a mistake on contest results, and my poem actually did not place!!! Hugs, Sandra
Smith Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 11:06 AM
Wonderful work Sandra, congratulations...
Haight Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Hi, Charlie. It only looks like I had a trophy win, but if you read Julia's blog, Poetry Soup made a mistake on listing contest results, and my poem actually did not place!!! Sandra
Chansarkar Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 10:27 AM
Moment of dilemma expressed perfectly,congrats Sandra!
Haight Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Hi, Sara. It only looks like I had a trophy win, but if you read Julia's blog, Poetry Soup made a mistake on listing contest results, and my poem actually did not place!!! Hugs, Sandra
Stebbings Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Beautiful description of a dilemma with this lovely monorhyme, Sandra. Barry. +7
Rodrigues Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 7:36 AM
Nice write, Sandra! Congratulations!
Haight Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Hi, KimIt only looks like I had a trophy win, but if you read Julia's blog, Poetry Soup made a mistake on listing contest results, and my poem actually did not place!!! Sandra
La France Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 9:46 PM
Sandra, nice monorhyme, well done and I am loving it 7 ~
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