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At the Foot of the Cross

Three lasses by the wooden cross 
all name Mary, were at a loss. 
His death, a faith walk direction 
from sin, for Christian perfection. 
With tempests, it brews as they toss.


10/21/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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May Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 12:42 PM
Death could not vanquish Him, Very nicely written Eve, Congrats on your win
Poet Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 12:02 PM
Back with hearty congratulations on your contest win, dear Eve.
Andresen Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 11:47 AM
- Lovely written, Eve :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Canerdy Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 8:22 AM
A lovely, reverent piece, Eve! Janice
Gasun Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 7:20 AM
Excellent poem using this beautiful form my dear poet friend Eve. I love it a lot. Thank you so much for sharing. Congratulations on your win! God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 12:50 AM
I like “ faith walk direction” and how he showed the path of righteousness and compassion despite all the suffering he endured, is the biggest message from his life. Well done Eve! Beautiful write.
Poet Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 10:16 PM
Excellent work, Eve. Your poetry flows beautifully, with the rhymes flowing together like music. It expresses the deep melancholy of this theological stance on the contest.
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 3:02 PM
Well done, Eve. I can hardly imagine the sorrow of the women standing there having to watch God's son dying
One Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 9:40 AM
A spiritual take on the contest. Your poem flows and rhymes very well..
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