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At the End of a Cowboy's Day

Me and my fellow buckaroos have had a real rough day. Plumb tuckered out, we still are not ready to hit the hay. Our bacon, the beans and biscuits have all been gobbled up. My coffee now is growing cold inside my old tin cup. Sitting around the fire, it feels good to just lean back. A harmonica my friend is taking now from his "war sack." melancholy is his tune. Two cowpokes who have guitars are joining in with my friend Jake. I look up at the stars. I want to liven up the scene, so I sing them my new song - the one I wrote a month ago. The others sing along. I love this life and being on this current cattle drive. Not married yet, I'm saving up. At least I can survive! It's time to get our sleep in. My bedroll's spread out. By and by, I'll be deaming about my gal Sal beneath this starry sky! Jan. 27, 2021 Jan. 27, 2021 for Line Gautheir's 'Cowboy Poetry' Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/4/2021 7:40:00 AM
WoW! Andrea, You came up with a good write for the contest theme. I could just imagine the whole scene; it's a scene that came right out of an old western movie. Well done. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/4/2021 6:20:00 AM
A comforting read Andrea. So peaceful. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 1/30/2021 7:54:00 PM
Great cowboy stereotypes. Enjoyable to read.
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Date: 1/28/2021 6:07:00 PM
Haha! I found the phrase 'saving up' interesting, to say the least. Plenty of room for double and triple entendres there! ~ Old Hoss
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Date: 1/28/2021 12:51:00 PM
love this heartwarming write
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Date: 1/28/2021 12:22:00 PM
So crisp and vivid! It's like watching a real episode on TV...a sure win for me and a fave!!
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Date: 1/28/2021 11:28:00 AM
Wonderful description giving the reader the feeling of being there. Great expression setting the mood of the tired cowboys relaxing after a hard day in the saddle. Great job Andrea. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/28/2021 10:07:00 AM
Superb! Great imagery of cowboy life! :) Big smiles!
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Date: 1/28/2021 7:00:00 AM
Andrea, I like this Rhyme from a day in the life of a cowboy. But sleeping out under the stars is can be hazardous. There could be grizzes. -Richard
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Date: 1/28/2021 5:16:00 AM
By the campfire at night while the wild wolves howl conjured up in my mind. good work enjoyed this poem
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Date: 1/28/2021 2:08:00 AM
LOVED this Andrea. The sweet song sitting around the fire, makes up for the hard tiring day of this cowboy. Perfectly captured Cowboy's day . Best wishes for the contest Andrea. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 1/28/2021 1:55:00 AM
I love stories of the old west and the famous cattle drives, well written Andrea and good luck. Tom
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Date: 1/28/2021 12:13:00 AM
Such a beautiful write... I enjoyed reading it...Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 1/27/2021 11:28:00 PM
Charming. Wish I could hear the cowboy's song. And hope Sal is madly in love with him. ~~
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Date: 1/27/2021 9:29:00 PM
Home on the Range. A poem that takes one there, love the camp fire and the sing song, a poem we need in these days of pandemic. Stay Safe Andrea.
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Date: 1/27/2021 2:48:00 PM
what a charming cowboy tale Andrea:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 1/27/2021 1:46:00 PM
I feel like I am sitting next to a chuck wagon with you enjoying brands under the stars.
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Date: 1/27/2021 1:38:00 PM
Bacon, beans, biscuits, coffee--music. Everything tastes good after a hard day. This cowboy is a gentleman!
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Date: 1/27/2021 1:00:00 PM
Looks like a strong contender for the contesrt. Good luck with it!
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