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Grandpa’s heading off to Bali so he said the other day, that’s when I laughed at Grandpa ‘cause I knew in a way, that he’d never pass the medical that tourists have to take, and so travelling overseas for him is just a big mistake. Grandpa’s eighty-four years old and ain’t no chicken now, but he wouldn’t listen to my claim on what authorities allow, and after hours of debating then we both declared a truce, he would go and see his doctor to avoid my strong abuse. I didn’t trust his attitude, so mentioned I would come along, just in case he tried to ruse me and to tell me I was wrong. Once the Doctor gave his verdict that I’m sure Grandpa would say, ‘Is to go home and pack his bags then enjoy his holiday.’ I watched the Doctor put old Grandpa through a thorough fitness test, and I could see that I was winning as the programs were assessed, for Grandpa whinged about his back and his mind remembers naught; there’s arthritis in his fingers and his breath keeps running short. The Doctor noted Grandpa moaning so he took his turn to state, that Grandpa’s getting to the age when he must deteriorate, “And who wants to make it to a hundred?” became the doctors line. Grandpa coughed and wheezed - “Anyone who’s ninety-nine!”

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Date: 5/13/2020 4:32:00 PM
So true. My mom wanted to live to 101 yrs. because she said her grandpa lived to be 100 and he was the meanest man she ever met. She just wanted to out live him. lol I honestly thought she would make it but she died at 92. Great story here Lindsay. God Bless and stay well, JB
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/15/2020 7:15:00 PM
Hello Judy … that's quite a story for a family gathering Judy, but it does have a sad ending. Thank you Judy, pleased you enjoyed this little tale - Lindsay
Date: 5/13/2020 4:24:00 PM
That is so true. I have three friends over 100, one of which is 107 now! She lives in England. Love the humor in this expressive poem Lindsay! xxoo
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Date: 5/15/2020 7:12:00 PM
Hello Connie … many people today are still very fit in their nineties and go on to achieve one hundred. Even at these ages there is nothing wrong with wanting to keep living life. Gee 107, that is something special - thank you Connie - Lindsay
Date: 5/13/2020 11:42:00 AM
Hi Lindsay~ Aging people are a gas! They still think they can do anything! And we laugh at them, not realizing we that we may never be lucky to grow to their age. Old people are to loved. When you love an older person, and are a caregiver~ It's love at its best. I enjoyed this immensely. Panagiota xxoo
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/15/2020 7:07:00 PM
Hello Panagiota … what I love about elderly people is to listen to their stories from their youth and how the lifestyle was. If we are lucky enough to reach an elderly age, I hope that young people might quiz me about my youth - thanks for your great comment Panagiota - Lindsay
Date: 5/7/2020 10:28:00 AM
Hi Lindsay: Let’s hope we all make it to 100. I sure hope Grandpa made it to Bali. At least he can ‘look’ at the pretty girls. Well done with the surprise ending,
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/15/2020 7:01:00 PM
G'day Suzanne … making 100 these days is still an achievement but there are quite a lot who do. Fifty years ago it happened but was a rarity. I think I'd be looking at a destination where the medical profession was top class - Thank you Suzanne - Lindsay
Date: 5/6/2020 8:58:00 AM
Perfect answer, and as always the zinger at the end. Well done my friend!.....pat
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/15/2020 6:55:00 PM
Hello Pat … see what you've got to look forward to, that's if we're ever allowed to leave the house again - stay safe Pat - Lindsay
Date: 5/6/2020 5:32:00 AM
Great write, Lindsay. The last last was killer! Hope you are doing well my dear friend. There's an old saying "Sex might be great, when you're ninty-eight...but heck, I won't participate (lol)Be wll -Charlie
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/15/2020 6:53:00 PM
G'day Charles … thanks for reading again Charles. I think just waking up in the morning at ninety-eight would be a huge bonus - catch you soon Charles - Lindsay
Date: 5/6/2020 2:38:00 AM
LOL HaHa Lindsay your punchline again, GREAT and so true, we would be a burden to ourselves and to others at 99 or 100. The Doc. was right! Excellent write my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/15/2020 6:50:00 PM
Thank you once again Jennifer for your kind positive comment. Elderly people don't often see them as a burden until they become completely housebound. We'd all like to think we might hit the century - catch you soon Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 5/5/2020 5:35:00 PM
ha ha ha I always lovely your rhymes and the killer punch line lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/15/2020 6:45:00 PM
Hello Jan … in this verse Jan, I don't think Old Grandpa wants a killer punch line - thanks again Jan - Lindsay
Date: 5/5/2020 2:48:00 PM
Thanks for the laugh! You are still the last line expert! Aloha! Rico
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/15/2020 6:43:00 PM
Hi there Rico … I don't know if I can write a humorous poem without finishing it off with a smart Alec line - thanks again Rico - Lindsay
Date: 5/5/2020 2:36:00 AM
The older they get the more contrary they get, smart answer for everything lol. Tom
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/15/2020 6:40:00 PM
G'day Tom … thanks for reading and commenting Tom. Oh yes, a time when we are set in our ways, but don't want to toss in the towel - Lindsay

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