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At Last, a Couplet

Couplet form poetry, to me you are so elusive My mind a stage as you act like a fugitive Letters and words are playing hide and seek Hidden in my thoughts, I must know the trick Every two lines where ending syllables rhyme I started to hunt phrases with patience of time Shall it take years of scribbling out a piece Now I focus to inscribe, evading the abyss Afraid this might not be as good as others' craft Almost I crumple my simple unfinished draft But slave I am of poetry's enthralling beauty I ought to complete my first couplet entry - author's note - my first Couplet attempt, didn't know if I've done justice to the form :(

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Date: 12/7/2018 10:43:00 PM
Oh, a magnificent couplet to read out loud! Each line is really awesome! Thank you, for sharing, Teri. God bless!
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Date: 10/4/2008 7:25:00 PM
Very witty Teri! hehehe! And so poignant with honesty and frailty, and that is its beauty! :o) Brgds. George
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Date: 10/4/2008 12:07:00 PM
Very nicely done....You definitely have done it justice!! :) ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/4/2008 9:05:00 AM
beautiful write and I love the way it flows, I am jut learning different sytles of poetry and first attempt or not, on this one you dropped it like it's hot, meaning it's the bomb, take care D-nyce
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