At Last, a Couplet

Couplet form poetry, to me you are so elusive	
My mind a stage as you act like a fugitive	
	
Letters and words are playing hide and seek	
Hidden in my thoughts, I must know the trick	
	
Every two lines where ending syllables rhyme	
I started to hunt phrases with patience of time	
	
Shall it take years of scribbling out a piece	
Now I focus to inscribe, evading the abyss	
	
Afraid this might not be as good as others' craft	
Almost I crumple my simple unfinished draft	
	
But slave I am of poetry's enthralling beauty	
I ought to complete my first couplet entry	


- author's note -

my first Couplet attempt, didn't know 
if I've done justice to the form :(
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Canama Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 10:43 PM
Oh, a magnificent couplet to read out loud! Each line is really awesome! Thank you, for sharing, Teri. God bless!
Anos Avatar
October 4, 2008 at 7:25 PM
Very witty Teri! hehehe! And so poignant with honesty and frailty, and that is its beauty! :o) Brgds. George
Richards Avatar
October 4, 2008 at 12:07 PM
Very nicely done....You definitely have done it justice!! :) ~ Carrie
White Avatar
October 4, 2008 at 9:05 AM
beautiful write and I love the way it flows, I am jut learning different sytles of poetry and first attempt or not, on this one you dropped it like it's hot, meaning it's the bomb, take care D-nyce
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