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At Heaven's Door

Heaven’s door was not as pretty as I had originally hoped. I was not repulsed, I was intrigued actually. I knocked once politely. No one came. So I knocked three small knocks. Nothing. That’s not the right door, someone said. I was shocked. How did he now? His head was wrapped in a big bandage. I followed him in spite of my reservations. He had found a bigger brighter, shinier door. He knocked and promptly disappeared. I knocked and nothing….. Several other doors were found. Keep trying! An angel yelled to me. You are doing great. Everyone has their own door! This was amazing to me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 8/23/2021 10:23:00 AM
Wow...I wanted more of this one. I kept wondering if I'd ever find the right door. Did you? What a novel concept...so imaginative.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/24/2021 2:29:00 AM
I cannot find the right door until He brings me home.

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