At Gettysburg

Unyielding stone, the furniture
au naturel, no dress lace tablecloth
concealing ants scavenging our picnic lunch. Loathe
are we to flick them while they steal our cheese and crackers.

Siblings ensconced, diffused canopy of oak
umbrellas, searing sun bewitches charming shadows;
clover, petals three and sometimes four, meadows
pleasant carpets cradling this resolute rock.

These stones echo cries reverberating past
more than a century's memorializing years
when other siblings set swords upon this grave frontier
in armies blue and gray amassed.

Immortal the crashing clash, bone against bone,
at Gettysburg to keep this nation one.

Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ryerson Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 6:52 PM
Wow...and I mean WOW Faye! How did you come up with THIS? Every line is an absolute gem! I tried to pick out a favorite but I can't...Congrats my friend! - Tim
Lindley Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 9:27 AM
This gem truly deserved a win! "Immortal the crashing clash, bone against bone, At Gettysburg to keep this nation one." Brilliant wrting and this Southern born man says-- BBBBBravoooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Parker Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 8:17 PM
congratulation Faye, my great great grandfather was at Gettysburg, I'm glad he survived or I wouldn't be here
Hamilton Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 7:25 PM
love the imagery captured here Faye congrats on win hugs
Nance Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 6:32 PM
Unique take on the contest, much enjoyed this winner :) :)
Guzzi Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 4:20 PM
So woven, intriguing! and the ending a surprise if not for the title? [Stone Cold Picnic] & then let the reader be surprised by Gettysburg? Congrad's Light & Love
Johnson Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 10:36 AM
Very different viewpoint and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 10:29 AM
I've read this one earlier......but I must confess, how much this one moved me, and I agreed with Cyndi's blog comments....you took this contest, and stirred our hearts in a way that my own poem could not do. Gettysburg, is frozen in my memory, a place where I spent a peaceful day with my family.....where unimaginable heartache was left to last an eternity. An amazing poem to honor those who died there.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 7:38 AM
Loved ur party Faye! Congrats on huge win!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 6:06 AM
Wow!! I love how you combine history, imagination and respect in one poem... Your second paragraph and third fills me with awe!! I remember Gettysburg that much as I have recited Lincoln's before and am touched...as did yours..:) ! MY CONGRATUlations!!!!
Fraser Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 3:00 PM
My mind pictures the standing to be the fallen, enjoying themselves as they await <*> Although I'm in Scotland, I enjoy reading up on the History of the American Civil War, which compelled me to write about it. Loved this piece Faye, James :)
Richards Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 9:37 AM
I am so moved by this poem......one normally doesn't think of Gettysburg as a venue for a garden party......but your poem captures the feeling of reverence and respect, history, and sadness. I remember walking those sacred grounds with my own family.....it was so peaceful, one could not imagine the violence and chaos that took place so long ago. What a memorable poem this is.
Devonshire Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 4:40 PM
Dear Faye, I love poems about history and have also written about Gettysburg. It is one of the "most haunted" places in the U..S. according to some sources. This poem will go to my faves. I am also sending a Soup Mail to you. You can respond if you like simply by hitting the "reply." Wishing you success in Cyndi's contest! Love, Carolyn
Gibson Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 5:31 PM
Hi, Carolyn, I tried to respond to your soup mail but your access is blocked or limited. I checked the spelling as you suggested. Both Webster and Thorndike spell it as I have. Not sure what your source was, but I will stick with what I have. This poem was inspired by a trip my sister and I took to several presidential homes and Gettysburg some years ago. We did picnic on one of the large rocks. Thanks for your interest in my writing and for your kind concern. As for the Moth Man, the legend is in West Virginia. A movie was made about it several years ago which may be available on the internet. You might also want to look at the Cranberry area of West Virginia. There are supposed sightings of a Big Foot type character there
Horne Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 4:35 PM
powerful sonnet
Merrill Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 3:20 AM
Hi Faye. Excellent write, as usual. I hope you win! Hugs and smiles...mel :)
Mehta Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 5:44 AM
Very deep and thoughtful write, Faye. Beautiful way to verblized nouns
Mohn Avatar
June 5, 2014 at 8:30 PM
Wow Faye...this is amazing
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