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At Forest's Dawn

Like a dream at forest's dawn so distant we wonder that it ever was... Dare we hope to return ~ will yonder trail take us there

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/3/2023 4:18:00 PM

May we follow the trail that takes us where we need to go, very profound, gw

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/3/2023 6:25:00 PM

Had a Robert Frost moment or two. That's my limit for a week, according to my union contract. Smiles, gw

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/3/2023 6:26:00 AM

"Not all those who wander are lost." JRRT I always have my passport handy. Let's go :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/3/2023 6:21:00 PM

I wander about that. lol.

Bill Baker

Date: 12/2/2023 6:46:00 PM

We'll never know if we don't try it and find out. Life is for living, not just imagining. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Bill Baker
Date: 12/5/2023 3:21:00 PM

Or we could go together? love your comments, gw. But I would go first. LOL Bill

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/2/2023 7:57:00 PM

True enough... You go first, ok?

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/1/2023 3:05:00 PM

I appreciate both the literal and figurative meaning to your words. Sometimes I feel like I'm living a dream and wonder if it really is...dare I hope to return to this dream? A lot to ponder here whether that was your intention or not. Have to fave this one. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/2/2023 7:58:00 PM

Actually, my intention was to finish the poem. The first three lines, I liked. Then I was stuck. ~ TT (Total Truth)