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At a Loss

The mental frames of the past were empty, as were all thoughts of any permanence Feelings of substance crushed into nothingness by the grind of time Aimless wandering had become the routine, faces moving by, in and out of focus Shuffling along in their daily lives of self-purpose But he knew better ... Vanity was a mirror of dark self-absorption: nobody ever saw the warts and imperfections when they looked at the image staring back at them Actually evaluating the loss and the waste required a strong constitution And that kind of moral fortitude was not in the genetic mix of most people He had let go of his failed ego so long ago, he had forgotten exactly when Or what traumatic event caused the dissolution of his youthful ambition Now, he walked amongst the ghosts of the present, seeing shadows of his lost, alternate future in others He didn’t think he lost much though

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/20/2017 4:37:00 AM
I love this poem. Although, sometimes mirrors are required. "We must go beyond the constant clamor of ego, beyond the tools of logic and reason, to the still, calm place within us: the realm of the soul." Chopra...or "Ego is not a Dirty Word", Skyhooks/lyrics.
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Date: 12/19/2017 6:57:00 AM
How many men and women will feel like this? Deep write, your pen excels time and time again...
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Date: 12/19/2017 3:53:00 AM
Very emotionally touching, so dramatic - you got intense and it worked! All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 12/18/2017 11:22:00 PM
Wow. Just Wow man. This is one of the best poems I've ever read. I love this Freddie from the first line to the last.
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Date: 12/18/2017 9:57:00 PM
A stirring poignant pen. Took a few reads to absorb. Fantastic piece my friend xomo!
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