At a General Public Meeting

At a general public meeting
They decided, on reflection
To replace the penal system
With a simple lead injection
Some people stood and argued
That shooting was too good
“Just take them from the court room
And hang ‘em in the wood”
Some others had their own ideas
On criminals like muggers
“Drag them to the river 
And drown the little buggers”
Then the voice of reason
Persuaded quite a few 
That treating prisoners this way
Was not the thing to do
“We’ll keep them in their prison cells
All cosy, dry and warm,
With lots of cash and man hours
They’ll hopefully reform,
But should this method fail to work
And progress not be made
We’ll take ‘em to the prison yard
And beat ‘em with a spade”

ã  John W Fenn  26-03-2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 19, 2009 at 4:47 AM
I missed reading so many extremely outstanding poems yesterday. I hope to get them read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us John. Love, Carol
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August 18, 2009 at 3:53 PM
Interesting take on a bad situation. Did you know that 90% of inmates have something like ADD or ADHD that hasn't been treated or other mental illness that are treatable if they are found. If there could be better handling on the other end when they are children then maybe we could close the prisons. Keep writing. Sara
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