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At a Distance

Afar off you stand, fearful of me because of what ... the color of my skin? At a distance (you deem safe) do you judge the worth of me As you live in gated comfort of isolation Wearing a white suit of fruit salad honors, pressed to the breast are the colors you love Valor and bravery was imbued to you by a metal wizard wand Spitting fire in your hand allowed you to stand afar off from me With a steely hand you pinned unspeakable deeds on the innocent and guilty Commendations notwithstanding, when did I give you a medal of fear to put me in a box safely? From blue service to white promotion, your scarlet actions were washed away by the firmament gutter cleaners And many heroic hosannas were rained upon you from a goodly parade distance As the familial tears of your justice were buried from view ... Safely, at a lengthy emotional dug space Afar off further you stand, hateful of me because of what ... the color of vitality you withdrew from under my brother’s skin? And you deposited your talisman protection at a safe distance, yet-to-be determined in the witching hour

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/11/2018 10:45:00 AM
This is an exceptional piece that hits hard! Every time I think that you have created a masterpiece, you churn out one that shows me that your talents are boundless! BRAVO and much respect, my friend! This gem is a fave of mine! Hugs Pandita
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Date: 4/8/2018 11:19:00 PM
Powerful. I then went to read "Pavlov" by Naomi Cornelia Long-Madgett...for the life of me, I cannot find a link to it, could you please direct me to the poem? After reading your preface to your poem, I have read two others of this Romantic Warrior Poetess and went onto learn a bit more about Naomi and her work, I especially love "Midway". I think Naomi would drink up your work, now that would be a collaboration. I look forward to reading Pavlov once I find it.
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Date: 4/8/2018 12:20:00 PM
WoW! Freddie, This is the kind of poem that I can relate too but not in its entirety but some what. I wrote a poem about the color of skin as well. This poem speaks loud and clear how one could be treated unfairly because of the color of their skin. I for one heard you loud and clear. PS, I looked for poem that inspired this masterpiece of words but I was unable to find it. Excellent job:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/6/2018 12:42:00 PM
Excellent poetry Freddie..your words shine with elegance and meaning!
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Date: 4/6/2018 10:08:00 AM
My heart stood at attention as I read these thoughts of yours; then I took out a pencil and began to write. You have inspired me, Freddie, to try something new. Valor, bravery, vitality, witching hour, words I have never used before, but I shall now. The way you put them together in one word: Masterpiece.
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