Astronomy--Pleiades

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Student fascinated with comets devises a strategy for defending earth from potential impact

Stunning tail-light of eve Sweeps across the heavens Streaked with chrome blue tassels: Swift the leap glossed by dust Spin of Hailey's Comet, Streams quickly... then fades off! Pleiades Contest of Joseph May 10/6/2020

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Jcb Brul

Date: 10/15/2020 10:39:00 PM

Spectacular imagery! Your pen never fails!

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 10/12/2020 8:50:00 PM

Supreme Salutations on your first first placement in the pleiades competition, nette. Enjoyed how you used "S" for Stronomy, quite unique, as it is the way we pronounce it.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/12/2020 4:02:00 AM

Action-packed...the Hailey’s comet! Congratulations, Nette!

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 10/11/2020 2:41:00 PM

Congrats on your top win with a write on one of the most famous Comets that we know! lovely description too! well done!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/11/2020 2:11:00 PM

Lovely writing... A beautiful entry for a beautiful win :) God bless you sweet friend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2020 1:53:00 PM

Beautiful S words you chose for this one, Nette. Congrats on top win.

Joseph May

Date: 10/11/2020 10:34:00 AM

Very Nicely done Nette, Congrats on your win

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/7/2020 6:52:00 PM

"Stunning tail-light of eve sweeps across the heavens" Such a beautiful image you paint with your words. I love everything about Space. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe. :) Hugs, Brandy