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Astronomy--Pleiades

Stunning tail-light of eve
Sweeps  across the heavens
Streaked with chrome blue tassels:
Swift the leap glossed by dust
Spin of Hailey's Comet,
Streams quickly... then fades off!


Pleiades Contest of Joseph May
10/6/2020

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2020

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JCB Brul Date: 10/15/2020 10:39:00 PM Spectacular imagery! Your pen never fails! Login to Reply

Reason A. Poteet Date: 10/12/2020 8:50:00 PM Supreme Salutations on your first first placement in the pleiades competition, nette. Enjoyed how you used "S" for Stronomy, quite unique, as it is the way we pronounce it. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/12/2020 4:02:00 AM Action-packed...the Hailey’s comet! Congratulations, Nette! Login to Reply

Krish Radhakrishna Date: 10/11/2020 2:41:00 PM Congrats on your top win with a write on one of the most famous Comets that we know! lovely description too! well done! Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 10/11/2020 2:11:00 PM Lovely writing... A beautiful entry for a beautiful win :) God bless you sweet friend Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/11/2020 1:53:00 PM Beautiful S words you chose for this one, Nette. Congrats on top win. Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 10/11/2020 10:34:00 AM Very Nicely done Nette, Congrats on your win Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 10/7/2020 6:52:00 PM "Stunning tail-light of eve sweeps across the heavens" Such a beautiful image you paint with your words. I love everything about Space. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe. :) Hugs, Brandy Login to Reply