Asking Alice

Alice had many friends, seems quite a few others 
have fallen down the rabbit's hole.
Janet appears often at the foot of the mushroom arguing with the Caterpillar.
Rubbing her legs tired from dream running, 
"Dern nightmare's always chasing me!"
Alice pokes her. "Miss Janet, why don't you stop running? Have a piece of cake?"
Somewhere, Janet hears her sisters voice listing sweet things, warm, cuddly kittens,
chocolate bunnies, candy canes...the voice fades in and out..
Screams too come from far off, "Get OUT!, get out..I hate you!" Her mother cries.
And lots of other nasty things too naughty for a little girl to repeat.
Smoke wreathes around the Caterpillar's head and the circles
spiral downward tickling Janet's nose. 
"Alice?" "Yes Janet?" 
"Why do they say there's no place like home?"
Alice frowns, "You shouldn't ask me dear,come...
let's find Dorothy for you!'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Lamoureux Avatar
December 17, 2012 at 8:07 PM
I liked this one right away. I think this is my personal favorite. Excellent work and win Debbie.
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December 14, 2012 at 6:25 AM
Congratulations on your win...loved this piece...took me back in years... Haven't been on Soup lately..Thank you for stopping by.. Love, Mehnaz
Johnson Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 6:41 PM
Congratulations Debbie on your rewrite of Alice in wonderland and your win. Love, joyce
Song Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 4:29 PM
Is this one from your treasure trove from a yr ago? I enjoyed the blending of fairy tale ideas and new characters..congrats, Debbie!
Brown Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 11:56 AM
Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Waking Up" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
May Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 7:01 AM
congrats on your win..
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December 13, 2012 at 12:56 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Debbie love xx
Tsiluma Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 12:26 AM
Well written Debbie! I love the approach you've taken with the form - very nice. Congrats on your win!
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December 12, 2012 at 8:20 PM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend, Debbie! Thank you so much for your full support! love and hugs, Leonora
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 28, 2012 at 10:50 PM
I feel like I in a dream inside a dream inside a dream. Fortunately I know where the door is. Poor Alice, poor Janet, poor Dorothy. Enjoyed your poem.
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November 17, 2012 at 8:07 PM
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Lamoureux Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 8:04 PM
A fairy tale for adults, great twist on classic tales. I really enjoyed your creativity. Sorry you missed my Poem, I was in the process of editing it. Feel free to pop back over, I always appreciate your kind words.
Flaherty Avatar
November 16, 2012 at 6:31 PM
Hi Debbie Alice frowns and she replies, You should not ask me dear. How withered have we become Debbie when our options have been demeaned to the point lying is the only option at our disposal. Sad I think how life has come to this. Cheers Chris
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