Ask Twice For Ice

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Yes, this really happened to me a couple of weeks ago!

At lunch, I wanted a simple iced tea But a tea with ice was not meant to be The glass, smoothly tall Held no cubes at all Where all my ice went, was a mystery! The waitress (who was not very nice) Lectured, my request was imprecise You must specify For ice to supply Next time, order your iced tea with ice! 8/3/19

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/9/2019 5:47:00 PM

Hello Michelle Faulkner, when I order ice tea it comes in a tall glass with ice. Have anice evening my friend.

Pat Adams

Date: 8/24/2019 3:47:00 PM

This is crazy! The way I heard it was, back in the 60's they took acid to make the world weird. Now the world is weird, they take Prozac to make it normal!............very well written my friend!............pat