Ashes of my olive grove

When I was just four,
Baba would walk me through the olive groves,
his land stretching endlessly,
acres of trees—each one a memory,
each one rooted deep in the soil of home.
He’d set up a ladder for me,
let me climb,
picking the dark, ripe olives
from the branches heavy with history.

“Go inside,” he’d say,
“bring a bucket of water.”
I ran, feet light on the earth,
filled the bucket from the well,
its coolness a moment of peace.

But then—
a scream, sharp and raw,
cut through the air.
I rushed outside,
and saw the flames—
huge, fierce,
devouring the olive trees,
the ones Baba had cared for,
the ones my ancestors had planted.

In the distance,
soldiers stood,
their smiles cold,
ruining everything we had known,
burning the heart of our land.

I dropped the bucket.
The water poured uselessly on the ground,
while the fire took what we had left—
our home, our history,
our future,
turned to ash.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 10/19/2024 2:40:00 AM
So sad what is happening there... even more horrific is that western countries are supporting it.. sad how certain lives do not matter and they call it collateral damage... who is chosen and who is not is just fiction.... your poem is nostalgic and a sad reality of what people have suffered.. I was there in June last year and was shocked at the apartheid... shocking..
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