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Ascension

We are two souls joining hands, sitting on the sand, beneath the Hawaiian winter night sky Our eyes gazing at the towering fire mountain king And the spirit of the people moves in our heart O islands of delight, sing the wonderful songs of how from death sprang life Rising from the depths of the sea, the islands came to be Breathing new life with breath so fiery Ascension from the sea is more than a story to you and me It is on display this very moment as we live and breathe Sitting around the beach campfire, your eyes glow with obsidian intensity As you stare into the basaltic heart of me Igneous are my thoughts, volcanic are my silent screams ... erupting I want your love to move so deep inside of me always, I’m erupting with lava desire You want my love to flow so deep inside of you always, You’re erupting with lava desire As the burning embers of the campfire rises higher and higher Ascension Let the burning embers glow always in our hearts, as we stoke the island fire of love Together we watch the burning embers rise from the fire Rising higher and higher Ascension And as we embrace and feel the heat of the burning embers glow, our passion rises ... Rises higher and higher Ascension

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/23/2017 3:32:00 AM
Ascension, eruption. Great poem! wonderful sensual metaphors there taking me to great heigths.
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Date: 5/22/2017 9:20:00 PM
What a wonderful poem of nature and soul.. Thank you so very much for your visit and compliment on my poem ~*
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Date: 5/22/2017 11:53:00 AM
Loved the "flow" of this poem! So powerful and beautiful! I have a heart for Hawaii!! Lived on Oahu for three years.
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Date: 5/22/2017 11:29:00 AM
Excellent Freddie ...powerfully written.
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Date: 5/22/2017 11:04:00 AM
Wow, now this is love poetry as it should be, hot and alluring. Beautifully done my friend.
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