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Ascending Belonging

Ascending within; to feel my happiness climB
Setting out solo; internal ecstasy can providE
Carving contentment by relearning to crawL
Enjoying this wonderful spiritual crescendO
Noticing on the way; all little things contaiN
Dualities in me but don't require explaininG
Intrinsic kaleidoscopes; always up the antI
Needless is it to enforce emotional refraiN
Grasp the view feeling truest in belonginG
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goyal Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 12:10 AM
Nice work, congrats on POTD!
Scorpio Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 12:48 AM
Thank you kindly! A.S.
Nicole Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 7:25 PM
Internal happiness ! Such a wonderful feeling within, indeed. This is beautiful, uplifting and spiritual, all at the same time. Your thoughts curl softly around me and my heart. Congratulations AS, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 7:33 PM
Brandy you are an actual soul personified for all who know you to see. It is I who should be honored, to even say that you're someone I could consider a friend! A.S.
Poet Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 7:16 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD, not easy to write a double acrostic. Enjoy your honor
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 7:30 PM
Sotto, when I think of looking up a friend in the dictionary I automatically think of you. You're the first person, to ever point out a genuine critique of my work to make me better. To get me to see that there is more for me to what I write. I am not educated in English or poetic form what I write comes deep from within. You got me to see that it matters how it's presented. For that my friend, I am eternally grateful! A.S.
Turner Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 6:01 PM
Congratulations, AS for POTD honors from this very inspirational poem. A double acrostic is a feat in itself.
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 6:30 PM
Daniel my friend, if you had any idea how much I value the critiques and the honesty you've given me.... I appreciate you man! A.S.
Hind Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 4:49 PM
Awww that's so sweet! Love the clich'e :) I am a Paige that will always be inspired by you <3 Hugs tight* just me!
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 5:18 PM
<3
Hind Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 3:54 PM
OMG!!! Congrats, my sweet and gifted friend! You deserve this; your work is so worthy of this. I am honored just seeing you featured! Love always, just me! <3
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 4:13 PM
;) you are like a rock, you're like a pillar, you're more than a friend, you're there when I need a voice to tell me what I'm saying is okay, but you're more than that you're a Paige of my life's history that I would read every single day! A.S.
Volumes Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 2:12 PM
Searching within ones self is a truly rewarding journey..Ascending within; to feel my happiness climB Setting out solo; internal ecstasy can providE. Love this poem. The presentation enhances an already wonderful verse. Absolutely worthy of your POTD. Congrats
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 4:10 PM
S.V., you're definitely going to get a visit from me Thank you very much for your kind words and congratulatory remarks! A.S.
M  Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 12:44 PM
Congratulations AS on POTD ….a very clever write! Debx
M  Avatar
November 19, 2023 at 4:41 AM
You are very sweet AS! Debx
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 4:09 PM
Deb you and I have shared some excellent moments and conversation. Thank you very much for the congratulatory words and for being another fine Deborah within my life! A.S.
Anaya Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 12:28 PM
Our journey of enlightenment isn't required or forced, but if we want to ascend, spiritual guides us along the way. I hiked many mountain trails and canyons, meditation along the way, healing. Great voice on audio, wow! Creative double acrostic. Congratulations on your POTD A.S.! Enjoy -Anaya
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 4:07 PM
Hello Anaya, by the way I am a real boy LOL ;). You have been such a sweet friend and confidant. I'm glad you enjoyed hearing the audio. Something I should have started doing a long time ago and in part I did start doing because of you. Appreciate your journey up and down those mountains, it absolutely matters! A.S.
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November 17, 2023 at 11:02 AM
A marvelous double acrostic, Antonio! So difficult to accomplish. Mesmerizing images. Truly a soulful "solo" journey into your life's pilgrimage of "intrinsic kaleidoscopes" and healing. Congratulations on your POTD! Blessings on your journey!
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 4:05 PM
Sam thank you very much! Truly appreciate you enjoying it and seeing it the way YOU do! A.S.
Romios Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 10:54 AM
An outstanding write Antiono, with you on the audio. This will be my FAVE of FAVEs.. I read the comments below. Thank you. Especially for your communications. If poetry is not about the truth within us, ……and this includes the truth about the world ….it is totally meaningless. Truth is like a fine wine ,,,which inspires the soul. Anything less than that, is totally meaningless! Pangie xxx
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 4:04 PM
Pangie, I was going to write some witty little poem to you. But I'm just going to speak truth you're unwavering dedication to being genuine is beyond inspiring! You are the type of person that the world needs to hear from on the regular. You will never be someone click through for me sweet friend! Much love A.S. / P.S. you were right I did need to look up heroine in a dictionary LOL
Goldsmith Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 9:52 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful double Acrostic write. I have not done one of these in a long time. Have a great/blessed day with your win.................
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 4:01 PM
Hey Paula, my day was blessed the first time you blessed my day! You are an incredible voice. A.S.
Baker Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 9:18 AM
Back to congratulate you on your POTD A.S. Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 3:59 PM
Bill you are a steadfast friend! And an inspiration the way you see the world is very similar to how I do. Thank you so much for being who you are. From your North Star brother to my Lone Star brother! A.S
Jones Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 8:24 AM
Cool acrostic. Congrats on potd!
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 3:57 PM
Thank you Karen, it is an honor to have read your works. And to have been able to share camaraderie with you! A.S.
Roper Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 7:16 AM
Great Acrostic on both sides. Congratulations on POTD
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 3:56 PM
Eve, to say you're an inspirational woman, would not even begin to describe how much I care about you! Warmly A.S.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 5:16 AM
Belonging in POTD honours for sure! Brilliant piece dear Scorpio. One magnificent big little thing this poem is, congratulations on POTD, enjoy the day! xomo
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 3:54 PM
And then there was MO, You Beautiful human being you've been more of an inspiration to me over the last year then you could possibly ever know! Your kindness your warm heart you're genuine glowing Humanity! Much love for you forever friend! A.S.
Kaufman Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 4:08 AM
Congratulations on this very challenging form of poetry. I am in awe of the talent on poetry soup. This acrostic is well crafted with such a lovely spiritual message. I hope you enjoy this well deserved recognition for your POTD.
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 3:48 PM
Nancy I wholeheartedly concur, the gifted poets and poetess that we have the privilege of sharing this media with are truly some of the highest class of humanity! Thank you very much for your kind words to me. Fondly A.S.
Kitchin Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 3:44 AM
A.S., a great poem and very creative, congratulations on POTD!
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 3:47 PM
Tania, thank you very much for your kindness and thoughts! Warmest regards A.S.
Messina Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 3:09 AM
Great acrostic and message, A.S. Congratulations on POTD!
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 3:46 PM
Thank you Charlie! Truly appreciate your kind words sir. A.S.
Allison Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 2:46 AM
what a wonderful message in an excellent double acrostic, i've attempted to do double acrostic in the past and know what a challenge it is! many congrats on a very well deserved POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 3:45 PM
Hello Jan salutations, thank you for your well wishes and congratulatory remarks! If you have perhaps posted that poem and would give me the kindness of letting me know it's title I would love to read it. Respectfully A.S.
Andresen Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 1:32 AM
- Creative at both ends... congratulations on your p.o.t.d. with a great message A.S. :) - hugs
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 3:38 PM
Anna-lise, I appreciate you so much my dear! You're an inspiring person. Thank you very much for seeing the message and enjoying it! Warm regards A.S.
Bowring Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 1:13 AM
Many congratulations on POTD with this very artistic, thoughtful poem. Love all the lines especially the first one. It’s very clever how you have created this acrostic spelling out both lines of the title and I love the spiritual ascend to contentment and belonging. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing and enjoy your celebratory day. Blessings to you :):)
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 3:43 PM
Thank you very kindly Christina, introspection has always been a pillar of my poems. I'm glad you could see it and find it in the writing! Warmly A.S.
Seeker Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 1:05 AM
Great spiritual message, enjoyed! Beautifully crafted too, it’s not easy doing a mirrored Acrostic whilst sticking with the theme. Warmest congratulations on POTD, Scorpio
Scorpio Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 3:35 PM
Thank you very kindly Seeker, it has been far too long since I've visited your work. I will endeavor to make some time to pay you a visit in the near future. Cordially A.S.
Baker Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 9:18 PM
WOW! Awesome creativity, AS. First letter of each line spelling first word of Acrostic, then last letter on each line spelling second word of title. I've never seen this done before. A FAV for my list, my friend. Kudos!!! Bill
Baker Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 9:03 PM
Thanks for explaining your process while writing this one, A.S. That makes sense to me. Well done, my friend. Bill
Scorpio Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 1:35 AM
First of all thank you very much Bill! Because I consider you a true friend, I hope you don't find me arrogant. I would like to explain this poem to you from my view. It tells a story with a beginning and an end. The image I was trying to create was the Ascension up a mountain pass. While explaining my emotional introspection. The poem is also meant to be somewhat of a concrete. Where belonging which is also the end word, slowly ascends to shorter and shorter lines. As I was writing it not really planned out also decided to include a rhyme scheme in the last five lines. I appreciate your work sir! I appreciate you appreciating mine. Cheers to your honor A.S.
Hind Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 12:04 PM
The greatest love is in the belonging; I agree! A breathtaking piece of poetry, and I love your poetic voice and how it reads. Thank you for your last comments on my work. Dear heart, I am glad YOU exist. Always love, just me!
Scorpio Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 12:17 PM
<3 Thank you! Much affection A.S.
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