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As You Stand By Your Window

R-ise of the sun comes up, O-ctober fourth at dawn; S-tanding by your window, E-agerly gaze at the lawn. L-et your eyes see the sky shining brightly up above; L-ooking at the flowers filled with so much love. M-ist and haze disappear, A-s you stand by your window; G-leams have just relieved P-ainful event and sorrow. A-nother light warms the day, N-ew morn greets the meadow; T-ry to watch the chirping birds, A-s you stand by Y-our window.

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Date: 4/15/2017 2:42:00 AM
beautiful indeed! :) shubham
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 4/15/2017 3:48:00 AM
Thanks, Shubham... I appreciate your kind comment meaning much to me...
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 4/15/2017 3:25:00 AM
Thanks, Shubham... I appreciate your kind comment meaning much to me...
Date: 4/15/2017 2:33:00 AM
softly holds aloft ... not found much oft ...
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 4/15/2017 3:48:00 AM
Thanks, Probir, your visit means a lot to me and I treasure it.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 4/15/2017 3:27:00 AM
Thanks, Probir, your visit means a lot to me and I treasure it.
Date: 4/15/2017 12:49:00 AM
This is a beautiful form of poetry writing and I can see that you excel in it. Well done.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 4/15/2017 3:32:00 AM
Thanks, Maria... your words of encouragement are inspiration to me....

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