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For the I Form - Imagism Poetry Contest of Constance La France

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“The snow did not even whisper its way to earth, but seemed to salt the night with silence.” — Dean Koontz Inhaling quietude, I watch glistening pearls swirling in twilight’s sky. The silence deepens as winter softly creeps into the night beneath a canopy of sparkling stars and the glow of a full pearlescent moon. I fall into slumberland, knowing when I wake, the gray barrenness of the land shall be effaced - replaced by a velvet quilt of white which winter so pristinely has laid down.

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Date: 10/4/2024 2:52:00 PM
Simply full of gorgeous, vivid imagery dear Andrea. So peaceful and serene. I love, “ As winter softly creeps into the night” “ replaced by a velvet quilt of white” especially. Pure, wonderful poetic words capturing a magical scene. Loved this! Many congratulations on your very worthy top win. Hugs x
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Date: 10/4/2024 9:20:00 AM
Super mental picture well-defined with clear cut word choice. I enjoyed this ver much. Congrats, Andrea
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Date: 10/1/2024 6:29:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my Imagism contest, beautifully penned, I love the image and quote, Constance
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Date: 9/28/2024 4:50:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery..a pristine poem, Andrea. Congrats! :)
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Date: 9/27/2024 3:11:00 PM
Just gorgeous. " the gray barrenness of the land shall be effaced " yesss.... :)
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Date: 9/26/2024 10:44:00 PM
Wonderful write. Love the silence of this moment. Beautiful. Congrats and God bless you. love, Gina
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Date: 9/24/2024 8:35:00 PM
Pretty as a picture, Andrea. Sweet dreams! ~ Gershon
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Date: 9/24/2024 1:51:00 PM
Ahhh!! So good writing in this one. Thank you for sharing..Sara K
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Date: 9/24/2024 10:05:00 AM
Nice short poem. Loved it.
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Date: 9/23/2024 10:32:00 PM
Short but sweet.. why couldn't it be extended a little longer? This is such a beauty, especially enjoyed "full pearlescent moon," this painted such a lovely vivid picture. pleasure reading
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Date: 9/23/2024 11:14:00 AM
Indeed, winter is time for quietude; to rest, enjoy indoor hobbies...and, perhaps, re-evaluate ones place and goal in life. Excellent read!
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Date: 9/23/2024 10:17:00 AM
Remember waking up as a kid and looking out to a carpet of snow ,it still facinates me now. Good luck in the contest Andrea. Tom
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Date: 9/23/2024 8:17:00 AM
You paint the perfect picture Andrea, sadly it rarely snows in London now days.
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Date: 9/23/2024 7:30:00 AM
this is delicious, between dream and reality, enjoyed your creative poem dear poet Andrea
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