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As the Mist That Rides the Waves

As mist that rides the waves My love clings to just You Only your love I crave You the only who saves Constant your love as dew As mist that rides the waves Telling your love in phrase Day by day to a few Only your love I crave For each day on his stave My musical notes drew As the mist rides the waves My right to hell did waive The sentence he totally threw Only your love I crave For you did call me from grave Transformation I flew As the mist rides the waves Only your love I crave

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/13/2010 5:35:00 PM

number one win!! way to go mom!!

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/3/2010 12:49:00 PM

hey Sarah, This is a great entry and a worthy win. Enjoy your winnings. keep up the great work. Love, Adeleke

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/3/2010 6:41:00 AM

Congrats Sara on your winning poem in Dr. Ram's contest with this wonderful write and win ..enjoy your big success and victory with this magical piece.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii watching fireworks at 3 a.m.... AlohA...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2010 12:34:00 AM

Congratulations, SAra, and I hope you are feeling better today! LUv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 7/2/2010 11:16:00 PM

Congratulations, Sara on your big success in the competition, Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/2/2010 10:41:00 PM

Congrats on the 6th place win in my contest

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/2/2010 10:20:00 PM

Great writing.Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Grace Eunsong Lee

Date: 6/26/2010 5:31:00 AM

Hello Sara, I've been meaning to read some of your poetry and comment in return for your kindly words on several of my poems. I enjoyed this one -- the title particularly drew me. You have some great many pieces, keep writing rich :) -Grace

De R

Date: 6/22/2010 5:23:00 AM

What a beautiful poem:) Congratulatios on your first place win!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/22/2010 3:10:00 AM

Wow! This is such a beautiful villanelle,Sara! Super congrats on your win! And thank you very much for your comments in my poem--wow that sure is a huge age gap between you & your adoptive brothers, & I;m sure you all had wonderful memories too ---I haven't heard that song you mentioned but I will try to look it up :) thank you again --nikko :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/20/2010 6:40:00 PM

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Constance La France

Date: 6/18/2010 5:35:00 AM

Congratualtions on first place with this lovely poem.. love constance

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/18/2010 4:37:00 AM

For each day on his stave My musical notes drew As the mist rides the waves ahhhhhhhhhh the power of love!

Cecil Hickman

Date: 6/17/2010 9:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win as well a beautifully written villanelle of faith that you share with us all,,wonderfully expressed with style and warmth,,,and Thank you for reading and commenting upon my words,,,Blessings..Cecil

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/17/2010 10:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian Strands contest "Poem Of Faith" Sara. Love, Carol

Mitch White

Date: 6/17/2010 7:02:00 AM

very cool- flows in transcendent way- Bravo Sara- Smiles

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/17/2010 12:29:00 AM

Congratulations Sara, beautiful poem indeed, Luv WN

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2010 2:05:00 PM

Congrats Sara on your 1st place win in this contest.. I had comp problems for two days so sorry to be late with my congrats.. with luv.. Linda-Marie

John Freeman

Date: 6/15/2010 10:50:00 PM

Congratulations, Sara on your first place in the contest. agape, Moses

Karla Null

Date: 6/15/2010 9:47:00 PM

Congrats on your win, beautiful poem.....Blessings....Karla

June Fone

Date: 6/15/2010 12:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your 1st place, with this wonderful poem, well deserved!! best wishes J.

Nick Bagnall

Date: 6/15/2010 1:50:00 AM

Congratulation on your success, I likesd the way you kept the rhyming scheme throughout the entire poem

Brian Strand

Date: 6/15/2010 12:53:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest.Rgds Brian.My latest contest 'A RETROSPECTIVE FOOTLE' is now open.If yo care to soupmail me a forwarding address I'll airmail your prize.

Lynette Chachere

Date: 6/10/2010 8:45:00 PM

this is a beautiful longing for that very special love you wish to express.every day someone begins to change in not a good way, always hurts inside, if the hurt gets too deep, it will haunt. i think i will get back to my serious side, of course, not too serious..have a wonderful night, Sara. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Brian Strand

Date: 6/10/2010 12:45:00 AM

Like the kyrielle flavour here of these triplets Sara.Rgds Brian