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As the Mist That Rides the Waves

As mist that rides the waves
My love clings to just You
Only your love I crave

You the only who saves
Constant  your love as dew
As mist that rides the waves

Telling your love in phrase
Day by day to a few
Only your love I crave

For each day on his stave
My musical notes drew
As the mist rides the waves

My right to hell did waive
The sentence he totally threw
Only your love I crave

For you did call me from grave
Transformation I flew
As the mist rides the waves
Only your love I crave

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2010

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Doris Culverhouse Date: 7/13/2010 5:35:00 PM number one win!! way to go mom!! Login to Reply

Adeleke Adeite Date: 7/3/2010 12:49:00 PM hey Sarah, This is a great entry and a worthy win. Enjoy your winnings. keep up the great work. Love, Adeleke Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/3/2010 6:41:00 AM Congrats Sara on your winning poem in Dr. Ram's contest with this wonderful write and win ..enjoy your big success and victory with this magical piece.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii watching fireworks at 3 a.m.... AlohA... Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/3/2010 12:34:00 AM Congratulations, SAra, and I hope you are feeling better today! LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 7/2/2010 11:16:00 PM Congratulations, Sara on your big success in the competition, Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 7/2/2010 10:41:00 PM Congrats on the 6th place win in my contest Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 7/2/2010 10:20:00 PM Great writing.Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Grace Eunsong Lee Date: 6/26/2010 5:31:00 AM Hello Sara, I've been meaning to read some of your poetry and comment in return for your kindly words on several of my poems. I enjoyed this one -- the title particularly drew me. You have some great many pieces, keep writing rich :) -Grace Login to Reply

De R Date: 6/22/2010 5:23:00 AM What a beautiful poem:) Congratulatios on your first place win! Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 6/22/2010 3:10:00 AM Wow! This is such a beautiful villanelle,Sara! Super congrats on your win! And thank you very much for your comments in my poem--wow that sure is a huge age gap between you & your adoptive brothers, & I;m sure you all had wonderful memories too ---I haven't heard that song you mentioned but I will try to look it up :) thank you again --nikko :) Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/20/2010 6:40:00 PM soup mail Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 6/18/2010 5:35:00 AM Congratualtions on first place with this lovely poem.. love constance Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/18/2010 4:37:00 AM For each day on his stave My musical notes drew As the mist rides the waves ahhhhhhhhhh the power of love! Login to Reply

Cecil Hickman Date: 6/17/2010 9:01:00 PM Congratulations on your win as well a beautifully written villanelle of faith that you share with us all,,wonderfully expressed with style and warmth,,,and Thank you for reading and commenting upon my words,,,Blessings..Cecil Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/17/2010 10:56:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian Strands contest "Poem Of Faith" Sara. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Mitch White Date: 6/17/2010 7:02:00 AM very cool- flows in transcendent way- Bravo Sara- Smiles Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 6/17/2010 12:29:00 AM Congratulations Sara, beautiful poem indeed, Luv WN Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/16/2010 2:05:00 PM Congrats Sara on your 1st place win in this contest.. I had comp problems for two days so sorry to be late with my congrats.. with luv.. Linda-Marie Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 6/15/2010 10:50:00 PM Congratulations, Sara on your first place in the contest. agape, Moses Login to Reply

Karla Null Date: 6/15/2010 9:47:00 PM Congrats on your win, beautiful poem.....Blessings....Karla Login to Reply

June Fone Date: 6/15/2010 12:40:00 PM Congratulations on your 1st place, with this wonderful poem, well deserved!! best wishes J. Login to Reply

Nick Bagnall Date: 6/15/2010 1:50:00 AM Congratulation on your success, I likesd the way you kept the rhyming scheme throughout the entire poem Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 6/15/2010 12:53:00 AM Congrats on your success in my contest.Rgds Brian.My latest contest 'A RETROSPECTIVE FOOTLE' is now open.If yo care to soupmail me a forwarding address I'll airmail your prize. Login to Reply

Lynette Chachere Date: 6/10/2010 8:45:00 PM this is a beautiful longing for that very special love you wish to express.every day someone begins to change in not a good way, always hurts inside, if the hurt gets too deep, it will haunt. i think i will get back to my serious side, of course, not too serious..have a wonderful night, Sara. ~Always&Forever Lynette Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 6/10/2010 12:45:00 AM Like the kyrielle flavour here of these triplets Sara.Rgds Brian Login to Reply

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