As the day bids farewell - Bite Size

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Streams of color blend seamlessly in swirls of delight. Heavily embossed across the faded sky, birds in flight. Sunset’s glowing colour of crimson and gold, As night’s velvety blanket begins to unfold. Whispers of a breeze wafting gently, flickers a scent. Evokes aromatic bursts, sensual yet earthy by intent.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/4/2023 7:21:00 AM

I especially like this one Svvie. The accompanying picture is perfect, or perhaps your inspiration came from the picture. Either way, it is stunning my dear friend! :)

Wayne Smith

Date: 12/3/2023 1:36:00 PM

Very romantic and superbly done.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 12/3/2023 9:54:00 PM

Oh Wayne, so lovely to hear from you ! I am glad you like this, as I don't often like my own poems, but you chose one that I really like too. We must keep in touch more often, it gave me such pleasure hearing from you. Best wishes from SV.