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As Sands Fall

"as sands fall" as sands fall with time peace is always on my mind searching light and beauty my eyes are all embracing seeing past the far and beyond to the grace of life unveiled are bright suns and moons shining explicitly such are moments of harmony that penetrate my soul SkyWatcher 07-20-23

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Date: 7/22/2023 3:34:00 PM
Hi Lisa, I really enjoyed reading you today. I found it to be so beautiful. Thanks for sharing the beauty that you see. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 7/24/2023 8:10:00 AM
Hi Alexis. Good Morning. So nice to see you. Thank you very much for such a gracious and generous review. Truly. Thank you. I hope all is well with you. Time sure goes by fast. Have a wonderful day and week. Take Care. Blessings (smile)
Date: 7/21/2023 10:53:00 AM
Hi Lisa love your poems sweet lady and i can see how much you enjoy writing as your comments are as lovely as your poems. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/22/2023 3:11:00 AM
Hi Jennifer. Good Morning. Thank you ever so much. Truly. I am honored by your commentary here Jennifer. Please know I think you are an amazing writer. May there be peace for one and all. Have a wonderful morning and weekend. Blessings always (smile)
Date: 7/20/2023 3:20:00 PM
Precious heart touching words Lisa….just beautiful! Debx
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Date: 7/21/2023 3:19:00 AM
Good Morning Deb. Hi. Thank you so much Deb. Truly. Have a wonderful morning and weekend too. Blessings always. (smile)
Date: 7/20/2023 3:06:00 PM
Heartfelt poetry, Lisa, it touches my soul. Thanks for sharing the beauty you see in life with us through your poetry my dear friend. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 7/21/2023 3:21:00 AM
It is I who thanks you Bill. Good Morning. Hi. I am truly honored by your commentary. I consider this review a gift. Have a wonderful morning and weekend too. May today be a great day. Blessings always (smile)
Date: 7/20/2023 5:13:00 AM
Hi Lisa. . a very peaceful poem that is a joy to read and think about. Panagiota
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Date: 7/21/2023 3:23:00 AM
Good Morning Pangie. Hi. Thank you very much. Yes, all I want these days is peace. May we all have it and may it surround us. I hope all is well. Have a wonderful morning and weekend too. Thank you again. Blessings always (smile)

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