As Rose Petals Wither

As rose petals wither in the autumn of life, Days hasten in orbits, some dull, some are bold. my muse rises to hoist a setting sun hung in gold, gleaming light abiding as daughter, mother, and wife. Glorious blessings entrusted outshine loss and strife. Circling paths of heaven and earth, charms conjured unfold as rose petals wither. I hum a lighthearted song from an innocent time and soar higher than summer to tranquilly reminisce. Then, receive autumn with thankful heart, tho' spring I do miss. Warm days dash by, distant Christmas bells chime as rose petals wither. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, July 22, 2012 for Nette Onclaud's RONDINE THE TRAFFIC OF LIFE Contest

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Date: 8/15/2012 5:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P. D.'s "Rose Poems" contest Rhonda.
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Date: 8/13/2012 4:24:00 AM
Congratulations Rhonda xx
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Date: 8/13/2012 2:16:00 AM
Rhonda congrats on your win..beautiful..David
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Date: 8/13/2012 1:30:00 AM
Rhonda, I love nothing more than roses & unicorns... congratulations and thanks once again for full filling my rose passion... xox~ :-) PD
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Date: 8/2/2012 7:05:00 PM
A life is so short and moves relentlessly toward sunset. Congratulations on your win with this moving poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/1/2012 11:58:00 PM
Rhonda ;-) congratulations with your awesome win in Nette's,, traffic contest... xox~PD
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Date: 8/1/2012 7:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "The Traffic Of Life" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2012 7:44:00 PM
Congrats Rhonda on your win!Loved it!!
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Date: 8/1/2012 3:18:00 PM
Rhonda, congrats on your win...wonderful read...David
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Date: 8/1/2012 2:59:00 PM
((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 8/1/2012 11:07:00 AM
A charming write full of hope [line 4 typo...gleaming]Congrad's on your fine write winning! Light & Love
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Date: 8/1/2012 9:46:00 AM
congrats Rhonda on a spectacular write so soft and gentle.. and a wonderful win luv.. a masterpiece of poetry.. thankxx for supporting my contest too..
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Date: 8/1/2012 8:38:00 AM
rhonda, may i say this piece is heartfelt and sensitive.. wonderful.. cheers to you for a superb win in my contest..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/1/2012 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Rhonda xx
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Date: 7/26/2012 11:06:00 PM
Amazing!!!
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Date: 7/22/2012 12:19:00 PM
Beautifully written poem my friend! I really enjoyed the character of your incredible write! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/22/2012 10:46:00 AM
Beautiful Rhonda - Luck to you in contest! - oxox Anne-Lise
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