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As Night Descends - a Rondelet

As night descends
God's paintbrush colours the night sky.
As night descends
purple, pink and violet blends.
An artist's mural floating by.
Beauty to bring tears to the eye,
as night descends.

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Kash Poet

Date: 8/1/2011 1:39:00 PM

Beautiful imagery here Francine...Congratulations on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2011 11:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem placing in Dr. Ram Mehta's " Rondelet" contest Francine. Love, Carol

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/1/2011 1:00:00 AM

Just love the line "An artist's mural floating by" just wonderful poetry. Thank you for a lovely evening. Lee

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/31/2011 8:57:00 PM

This is a great poem. congratulaitons Francine. Love, Joyce

John Freeman

Date: 7/31/2011 8:31:00 PM

Francine, Congratulations in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/31/2011 6:37:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS~~~~smile for the big placement~~~~*-*junjun

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/31/2011 5:17:00 PM

So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, Francine. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/31/2011 5:16:00 PM

Congrats Francine on your lovely win in the contest with this delicate piece luv..

Jack Horne

Date: 7/31/2011 4:03:00 PM

Awesome imagery. Many congrats, Francine : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2011 3:59:00 PM

wow, mural floating by, that 's so pretty! congrats on the win, Francine.

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 7/31/2011 2:34:00 PM

A Ronelet Contest Congratulations! Very nice. Have a peaceful day filled with blessings. Caryl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/31/2011 2:13:00 PM

My congratulations on this win in my contest, Francine

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/22/2011 9:06:00 AM

What a lovely image you paint of dusk, Francine. Love the way you used this form to create this picture. Beautiful entry for the contest and I'm sending winning wishes your way. Love, Carolyn