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As Night Descends - a rondelet

As night descends God's paintbrush colours the night sky. As night descends purple, pink and violet blends. An artist's mural floating by. Beauty to bring tears to the eye, as night descends.

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Date: 8/1/2011 1:39:00 PM
Beautiful imagery here Francine...Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/1/2011 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem placing in Dr. Ram Mehta's " Rondelet" contest Francine. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2011 1:00:00 AM
Just love the line "An artist's mural floating by" just wonderful poetry. Thank you for a lovely evening. Lee
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Date: 7/31/2011 8:57:00 PM
This is a great poem. congratulaitons Francine. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/31/2011 8:31:00 PM
Francine, Congratulations in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/31/2011 6:37:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS~~~~smile for the big placement~~~~*-*junjun
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Date: 7/31/2011 5:17:00 PM
So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, Francine. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/31/2011 5:16:00 PM
Congrats Francine on your lovely win in the contest with this delicate piece luv..
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Date: 7/31/2011 4:03:00 PM
Awesome imagery. Many congrats, Francine : )
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Date: 7/31/2011 3:59:00 PM
wow, mural floating by, that 's so pretty! congrats on the win, Francine.
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Date: 7/31/2011 2:34:00 PM
A Ronelet Contest Congratulations! Very nice. Have a peaceful day filled with blessings. Caryl
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Date: 7/31/2011 2:13:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in my contest, Francine
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Date: 7/22/2011 9:06:00 AM
What a lovely image you paint of dusk, Francine. Love the way you used this form to create this picture. Beautiful entry for the contest and I'm sending winning wishes your way. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/20/2011 11:35:00 AM
hey Francine, this is great, good luck, David
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