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As Long as I See the Sky

as long as i see the sky - illumination with faithful practice

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2024 9:44:00 AM

Good spiritual monoku. Congrats, dear

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2024 6:29:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning line, Kim :) - hugs

thriveni c mysore

Date: 11/28/2024 6:37:00 PM

congratulations dear poet. 'illuminating' write. beautiful. cheers.

Paige Hind

Date: 11/8/2024 6:48:00 PM

Such a lot of truth in this, dear Kim...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2024 7:29:00 AM

Thank you, Paige!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/7/2024 10:21:00 AM

Love this one Kim, the sky is a reminder to us of his wonderful creation. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2024 5:43:00 AM

For a long time it would have been the roof to those of the earth until we learned to see into the universe. Just so interesting! God bless!

John Read

Date: 11/7/2024 9:59:00 AM

Good luck in the contest Kim, I've read so many good ones including yours, it's going to be hard choosing a winner.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2024 5:44:00 AM

Thank you, John!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/7/2024 7:57:00 AM

Like everything else in life, faith must also be practiced when we look up towards the sky and hear celestial angels sing, and feel our souls illuminate, we are on faith's doorstep. Good luck in the contest my good friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2024 5:47:00 AM

We can only see the delights of first heaven as the night makes them visible. Wait until we see the brightness of the highest heavens. God bless you, sweet Jennifer! Hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/7/2024 7:18:00 AM

- Lovely, Kim :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2024 5:47:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 11/7/2024 5:56:00 AM

Dear Kim, I love your Monoku with such wonderful hints of faith and prayer. Such a lovely line! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2024 5:47:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel! Blessing, dear one!