As Long As I See The Sky

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Written, November 6, 2024
For the Contest, “As Long As I See The Sky”
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Sponsor, Jcb Brul

As long as I see the sky- I'm still vertical and glad I'm alive.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2024 9:46:00 AM

Love this! Congrats on the win

thriveni c mysore

Date: 11/28/2024 6:40:00 PM

congratulations dear poet. 'vertical'- to be alive. so well written thought. cheers.

Tom Woody

Date: 11/6/2024 1:46:00 PM

Ha! Love it. If I was going to enter mine would be similar. "Crikey, as long as I can see the sky I know I'm not a flippin' corpse mate."

John Read

Date: 11/6/2024 10:05:00 AM

Hi Sandra, I agree with what you say, good luck in the contest.