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As I Walk-4

As I Walk in confusion intense emotions overwhelm immersed, drowning in a vortex of treasured memories life steals away my breath crushed by the weight of harsh reality. I cannot breathe without you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/25/2019 7:15:00 PM
The fragrance of lost love lingers on even when the bottle's empty. I can smell it in your words.
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/25/2019 7:52:00 PM
Yep, thank you
Date: 12/5/2019 10:13:00 PM
This sounds complex. Yet it makes perfect sense.
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/6/2019 6:59:00 AM
I wish I could post the pictures that go with these poems, but I have yet to figure out how to do that....sigh...thanks

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