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As I Lay Dying, I Asked

Who will decide my fate? What is to become of my existence? When will I enter the gate? Where are you Lord, I need your assistance? Why am I wandering and full of earthly resistance? ____________________________ August 30, 2012 Poetry/Quintain/As I Lay Dying, I asked Copyright Protected, ID 08-415-618-30 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, 5 W's Sponsor, Harry Horseman, Judged 08/27/2012 Second Place

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 10:34:00 AM

constance, congrats;-) In Harry's fun fun... 5 w's contest. I think this was a fun contest.. Take care.. always~PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2012 7:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Harry's "5W's" contest Dear Heart. Sorry to be late commenting. Love, Carol

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 8/29/2012 8:20:00 PM

Congrats on your win Constance. Hugs

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/29/2012 5:03:00 PM

Wow, intriguing write, Constance! A belated congrats on a wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2012 8:08:00 PM

this is marvelous. One of the best the way you chose to do it! Congratulations, Constance.

Gail Debole

Date: 8/28/2012 4:00:00 AM

Hi Constance - Congratulations on your win! Well done. Your sensitive soul comes through loud and clear. - Gail

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/27/2012 2:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Lee

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/27/2012 1:08:00 PM

Your heart and soul wrote this from the most beautiful perspective and I appreciate its depth very much!! Congrats, Constance! Cheers to u! gwendolen

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/27/2012 9:08:00 AM

So lovely, and so you !!! So nice to see you here in the winner's circle!!

Len Gasun

Date: 8/27/2012 8:04:00 AM

I love it! Congratulations on your win!

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 8/27/2012 7:54:00 AM

Congrats on your win!

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/27/2012 7:43:00 AM

Some very powerful questions. Congrats on your win, Constance! Love, Kim

James Fraser

Date: 8/27/2012 7:36:00 AM

I dare say many persons have lived your words Constance. Fine poetry as per normal from you. Many congratulations on your win in Harry's contest. Have a lovely Monday :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/27/2012 7:01:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win Constance xx

Cory Long

Date: 8/27/2012 5:36:00 AM

congrats on your win.. have a great day cory

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 8/27/2012 5:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this gem. I like. :)

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/27/2012 5:05:00 AM

Congratulations on a winning poem. Full of faith.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/27/2012 4:40:00 AM

Constance another absolute gem i had the honour of reading for my contest. congrats to you, and thanks for entering. hope you are feeling well.

Richard Palmer

Date: 8/26/2012 5:11:00 PM

great write wishing you the best Constance La France,check out my When I Die

Jack Horne

Date: 8/24/2012 3:16:00 PM

awesome enytry for Harry's contest, my friend. Hope you are growing stronger every day - love to you and those sweet kitties xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/23/2012 2:34:00 PM

This is a very wonderful and ingenious write my friend! I am truly enthralled with this awesome poem! You have written an outstanding piece, Great Work!!