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As I Lay Dying, I Asked

 
Who will decide my fate?
What is to become of my existence?
When will I enter the gate?
Where are you Lord, I need your assistance?
Why am I wandering and full of earthly resistance?

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August 30, 2012


Poetry/Quintain/As I Lay Dying, I asked
Copyright Protected, ID 08-415-618-30
All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France


Written for the Standard contest, 5 W's
Sponsor, Harry Horseman, Judged 08/27/2012

Second Place

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/1/2012 10:34:00 AM constance, congrats;-) In Harry's fun fun... 5 w's contest. I think this was a fun contest.. Take care.. always~PD Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/30/2012 7:57:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Harry's "5W's" contest Dear Heart. Sorry to be late commenting. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 8/29/2012 8:20:00 PM Congrats on your win Constance. Hugs Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 8/29/2012 5:03:00 PM Wow, intriguing write, Constance! A belated congrats on a wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/28/2012 8:08:00 PM this is marvelous. One of the best the way you chose to do it! Congratulations, Constance. Login to Reply

Gail Debole Date: 8/28/2012 4:00:00 AM Hi Constance - Congratulations on your win! Well done. Your sensitive soul comes through loud and clear. - Gail Login to Reply

Lee Ramage Date: 8/27/2012 2:56:00 PM Congratulations on your win. Lee Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 8/27/2012 1:08:00 PM Your heart and soul wrote this from the most beautiful perspective and I appreciate its depth very much!! Congrats, Constance! Cheers to u! gwendolen Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 8/27/2012 9:08:00 AM So lovely, and so you !!! So nice to see you here in the winner's circle!! Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 8/27/2012 8:04:00 AM I love it! Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Modupe Sefunmi Date: 8/27/2012 7:54:00 AM Congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 8/27/2012 7:43:00 AM Some very powerful questions. Congrats on your win, Constance! Love, Kim Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 8/27/2012 7:36:00 AM I dare say many persons have lived your words Constance. Fine poetry as per normal from you. Many congratulations on your win in Harry's contest. Have a lovely Monday :) Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 8/27/2012 7:01:00 AM Congratulations on a fine win Constance xx Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 8/27/2012 5:36:00 AM congrats on your win.. have a great day cory Login to Reply

Delysia Hendricks Date: 8/27/2012 5:27:00 AM Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this gem. I like. :) Login to Reply

Joann Grisetti Date: 8/27/2012 5:05:00 AM Congratulations on a winning poem. Full of faith. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 8/27/2012 4:40:00 AM Constance another absolute gem i had the honour of reading for my contest. congrats to you, and thanks for entering. hope you are feeling well. Login to Reply

Richard Palmer Date: 8/26/2012 5:11:00 PM great write wishing you the best Constance La France,check out my When I Die Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 8/24/2012 3:16:00 PM awesome enytry for Harry's contest, my friend. Hope you are growing stronger every day - love to you and those sweet kitties xx Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 8/23/2012 2:34:00 PM This is a very wonderful and ingenious write my friend! I am truly enthralled with this awesome poem! You have written an outstanding piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply