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As I Lay Dying, I asked

Who will decide my fate? What is to become of my existence? When will I enter the gate? Where are you Lord, I need your assistance? Why am I wandering and full of earthly resistance? ____________________________ Poetry/Quintain/As I Lay Dying, I asked Copyright Protected, ID 12-415-618-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, 5 W's Sponsor, Harry Horseman Placed

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Date: 9/1/2012 10:34:00 AM
constance, congrats;-) In Harry's fun fun... 5 w's contest. I think this was a fun contest.. Take care.. always~PD
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Date: 8/30/2012 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Harry's "5W's" contest Dear Heart. Sorry to be late commenting. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2012 8:20:00 PM
Congrats on your win Constance. Hugs
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Date: 8/29/2012 5:03:00 PM
Wow, intriguing write, Constance! A belated congrats on a wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/28/2012 8:08:00 PM
this is marvelous. One of the best the way you chose to do it! Congratulations, Constance.
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Date: 8/28/2012 4:00:00 AM
Hi Constance - Congratulations on your win! Well done. Your sensitive soul comes through loud and clear. - Gail
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Date: 8/27/2012 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 8/27/2012 1:08:00 PM
Your heart and soul wrote this from the most beautiful perspective and I appreciate its depth very much!! Congrats, Constance! Cheers to u! gwendolen
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Date: 8/27/2012 9:08:00 AM
So lovely, and so you !!! So nice to see you here in the winner's circle!!
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Date: 8/27/2012 8:04:00 AM
I love it! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/27/2012 7:54:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/27/2012 7:43:00 AM
Some very powerful questions. Congrats on your win, Constance! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/27/2012 7:36:00 AM
I dare say many persons have lived your words Constance. Fine poetry as per normal from you. Many congratulations on your win in Harry's contest. Have a lovely Monday :)
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Date: 8/27/2012 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win Constance xx
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Date: 8/27/2012 5:36:00 AM
congrats on your win.. have a great day cory
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Date: 8/27/2012 5:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this gem. I like. :)
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Date: 8/27/2012 5:05:00 AM
Congratulations on a winning poem. Full of faith.
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Date: 8/27/2012 4:40:00 AM
Constance another absolute gem i had the honour of reading for my contest. congrats to you, and thanks for entering. hope you are feeling well.
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Date: 8/26/2012 5:11:00 PM
great write wishing you the best Constance La France,check out my When I Die
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Date: 8/24/2012 3:16:00 PM
awesome enytry for Harry's contest, my friend. Hope you are growing stronger every day - love to you and those sweet kitties xx
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Date: 8/23/2012 2:34:00 PM
This is a very wonderful and ingenious write my friend! I am truly enthralled with this awesome poem! You have written an outstanding piece, Great Work!!
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