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I welcome this colorful array, of leaves curling me- like a symphony even the teasing touch of the wind as Autumn whispers - it’s not the end, just the beginning - of a frosted morning The cold brings a chill, just for the thrill I am needing, wanting truly aching to hibernate, under you If there was a way, to avoid the falling of winter (the cold kissing my skin) a way to stay- in the soft melody of leaves dancing with ease, this is where i would play However, as Autumn whispers in a hushed sigh - i am soon to know why the chill must linger, just for the thrill - i am still needing, and i am soooo wanting truly aching to hibernate - under you Perhaps . . . I always will _________ ~ The wind is being playful with its touch, simply touching all of me ~ Just a little scribble

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Date: 5/17/2021 8:36:00 PM
Your pen dances with the leaves, Beautiful write Brandy..
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/17/2021 9:03:00 PM
Such a nice compliment. Thank you, Joseph. It has been a long time since I have visited this poem. I really like this one. The moments and emotions within. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Date: 4/5/2019 11:42:00 AM
I loved this poem. Perfect use of description. A amazing poem.
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Date: 4/5/2019 1:40:00 PM
Thank you John. I appreciate your kind words. My best to you. :) Brandy
Date: 11/18/2018 7:14:00 AM
To hibernate in the arms of the beloved is the most amazing place to rest... Beautiful words..
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Date: 11/18/2018 7:46:00 AM
Being close is always welcomed. Thank you Silent One. I appreciate your lovely comment. Your kind words. :) Brandy
Date: 11/16/2018 9:28:00 AM
Hi Brandy, Your wonderful description of Autumn is poetically perfect! Please invite me to hibernate with you, what an experience, embracing this season would be! xoxo, Jennifer.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/16/2018 1:26:00 PM
Dear Jennifer, thank you for your lovely comment. Autumn is a wonderful time of year indeed. :) I hope you find a warm place to hibernate. I appreciate your kind words. Many blessings to you. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/15/2018 12:07:00 PM
Autumn scribbles...lovely mix, Brandy...I love Autumn...love & Autumn whispers...^WW^
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/15/2018 6:37:00 PM
Thank you Winged Warrior. :) I appreciate you and your thoughts. May the wind whisper softly for you. Love and Scribbles. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/14/2018 11:55:00 PM
A beautiful mixture of imagery full of poetic meaning, and then there's hibernating - love the combo as delivered by you. I think you had fun writing this one. All the best ... CayCay
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/15/2018 11:47:00 AM
Dear CayCay, your thoughts bring a smile. :) I did enjoy creating this seasonal poem of love- as it is incredible hibernating. When it's cold. Staying in the warmth. I appreciate you and your kind words. Many blessings to you. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/14/2018 11:34:00 AM
Good morning ma'am. It's a frosty one in my part of the world. Winter may have just bypassed autumn here. From the sound of this poem, it seems like you may want to be under a bear skin rug, or maybe bare skinned under something. Well done, again....TAH
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/14/2018 1:59:00 PM
Good afternoon Tobey. You are right. It seems as though Winter takes over Autumn. The rain falls here today, like a playful melody. The wind is cold against the skin, and the sky holds a distant gray. I am smiling. :) Blessings are everywhere. Yes, to be under a bear skin rug would be nice- or under something else. This poem is about the season, and about being close. Warm moments. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/14/2018 7:45:00 AM
Autumn’s song can be so seductive.. a gentle, caressing touch surrounded by dancing colored hues. But the end of Autumn’s song can spell a lonely, dreary cold. So enjoy the music but be ready to hibernate before too long......
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Date: 11/14/2018 11:04:00 PM
Yes.. I have blue eyes and I write about them from time to time because they are amazing :) In my write, “Crazy Behind These Blues” I kind of poke fun of myself thinking my blue eyes are all that’s needed to charm any girl. In this write I find out the hard way that nothing could be further from the truth. In real life these blue eyes have never let me down.. so far, anyway. I think that’s because I have learned how to smile with my eyes. And I’m a really happy guy...
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/14/2018 1:50:00 PM
Thank you Lyric Man. There is beauty in such moments, when colors wrap around the wind- as another season is welcomed. The cold can cause a heart to linger in tender emotions. I shall caress the sweet melody, the one that brings a smile. :) Yes, hibernate- before cold covers all of me. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/14/2018 2:45:00 AM
Sounds like a warm blanket...just kidding...Love your imagination expressing desires and sensations of the coming cold...All the best Brandy
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Date: 11/14/2018 11:55:00 AM
Yes, a soft warm blanket indeed- to caress the entire being. :) Many moments can be found in this little scribble of mine. Every sensation tangling around the imagination. Thank you Arturo. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/13/2018 7:04:00 PM
Beautifully put: " I am needing, wanting truly aching to hibernate, under you." It is so brrrrr chilly here this morning, 17 degrees! This poem is beautiful.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/13/2018 10:14:00 PM
Thank you Caren. With the cold, being close- to hibernate in the warmth, yes- it is sooo needed and wanted. :) I appreciate you and your kind words. Try to stay warm my friend. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/13/2018 3:10:00 PM
This was enchantingly beautiful Brandy, Your words flow softly across the page creating wonderful visions for all of us.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/13/2018 6:33:00 PM
Thank you Chris. Your kind words are appreciated. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
Date: 11/13/2018 2:15:00 PM
Let the chill linger.. and may the autumn winds whisper to you that your dreams will come true. Sights of autumn so delicately captured in your words..intertwined with ardent human emotions. A poem beautifully rendered, as always, Brandy.
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/13/2018 6:30:00 PM
Oh my!! Your thoughts are beautiful. It's as if you have created a poem here within your comment. I appreciate you and your kind words. Of course I will linger in the tenderness of such a dream. :) Thank you Vijay. The Winter's chill cannot separate me from the clouds, the beauty of day- the magic of the night. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/13/2018 12:56:00 PM
It is truly cold here today; I prefer the warm kissing my skin than the cold. May you enjoy the beautiful moments as you hibernate. My best to you dear friend. John
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/13/2018 6:18:00 PM
The wind has been cold upon my skin today. I agree- the warm touch is better. :) Thank you John, for always reading my poetic whispers, and for all your kind words. Stay warm my friend. ~ Brandy
Date: 11/13/2018 10:05:00 AM
I love this. Very nice Brandy :)
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/13/2018 11:50:00 AM
:) Thank you Heidi. I appreciate your kind words. ~ Brandy

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