As Autumn Changes

The roundest, orangest, nicest pumpkin I find
 In a farmer's field ten miles from town.
Uncarved and free from ghoul's design
with unsaid prayers, I set my pumpkin down.

I set it down in grass in front of a stone.
A granite stone turned in perfect square.
Light's changing now to a dimmer tone.
My tears fall from my empty eyes that stare.

They stare as time passes quickly before my eyes.
The rotting fruit has caved on all four sides.
Hence, heraldic symbol dies
To become slime above where love resides.

Globe spatters, sending forth white pearly seeds
with matted threads. Could this be human brain?
Lunging forth, I trip on rocks and weeds.
My legs move, but I can make no gain.

I look to see what caused my foot to trip.
I see a granite stone much like the same
as my Love's,  it ends with letters RIP.
and,  'bove is' -Wife of-  and - Oh No - my name.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Godwin Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 10:44 AM
Oh, such an impressively delivered story with a chilling, surprise ending. HOWEVER, I suspect you wrote many poems as therapy and this is one? Since 13, my poems have served as therapy more than any therapist I've seen. (not that I've seen a lot, I think I've tried 3 during my life, just a few visits with each, only to realize I was more intuitively psychologically aware than them). OK, I'm wrong, not therapy but Halloween inspired. Somehow, I caught that fact from comments below. Happy to be wrong ... CayCay
Smith Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 4:36 PM
Now have seen this will have to read more of your work. You lead us to a sticky end indeed. But loved your tempo. Hope you never go over to the dark side. You would be too good at bewitching others. Best regards from this seventy old who is wise to most tricks but a not immune to being tempted by a mars bar or other chocolate treats.
Greenhough Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 5:00 PM
Chocolate is always tempting. It is a pleasure to read your review. More to come.
May Avatar
June 2, 2024 at 10:10 AM
A sad ending to this verse, Very nicely penned
Greenhough Avatar
June 2, 2024 at 11:06 AM
It is supposed to be a Halloween poem, so it is scary. Thank you for the compliment. I have a few scary poems in my brain, but will need a crowbar to get them out.
Baker Avatar
February 8, 2024 at 9:36 PM
Great imagery and message in this one, Hilda. Nice twist for the ending. Good poetry, my friend, thanks for sharing it with us. Bill
Greenhough Avatar
February 8, 2024 at 9:44 PM
Thank you. I was concentrating on this goth style but lately, I've gotten away from it. I'm glad you liked it.
Kerr Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 10:10 AM
A poem that probes great depths touching on meaningful matters philosophical. The symbolism of the fruit has a special resonance. A superb ending rounds this off. I’m most grateful for your complimentary words on Golden Gust Glow Howard
Greenhough Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 10:12 AM
Thank you.
Bowring Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 12:16 PM
This is a very well written poem Hilda with lovely imagery. Didn’t see the ending coming! Great writing.Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.
Greenhough Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 2:22 PM
Thank you.
Empress Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 10:06 AM
Deep and creative word weaving. That ending is so good! Loved the flow of this and how descriptive it is. Pleasure reading you
Greenhough Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 2:23 PM
Thank you.
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