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As Autumn Changes

The roundest, orangest, nicest pumpkin I find In a farmer's field ten miles from town. Uncarved and free from ghoul's design with unsaid prayers, I set my pumpkin down. I set it down in grass in front of a stone. A granite stone turned in perfect square. Light's changing now to a dimmer tone. My tears fall from my empty eyes that stare. They stare as time passes quickly before my eyes. The rotting fruit has caved on all four sides. Hence, heraldic symbol dies To become slime above where love resides. Globe spatters, sending forth white pearly seeds with matted threads. Could this be human brain? Lunging forth, I trip on rocks and weeds. My legs move, but I can make no gain. I look to see what caused my foot to trip. I see a granite stone much like the same as my Love's, it ends with letters RIP. and, 'bove is' -Wife of- and - Oh No - my name.

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Date: 7/25/2024 4:36:00 PM
Now have seen this will have to read more of your work. You lead us to a sticky end indeed. But loved your tempo. Hope you never go over to the dark side. You would be too good at bewitching others. Best regards from this seventy old who is wise to most tricks but a not immune to being tempted by a mars bar or other chocolate treats.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 7/25/2024 5:00:00 PM
Chocolate is always tempting. It is a pleasure to read your review. More to come.
Date: 6/2/2024 10:10:00 AM
A sad ending to this verse, Very nicely penned
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 6/2/2024 11:06:00 AM
It is supposed to be a Halloween poem, so it is scary. Thank you for the compliment. I have a few scary poems in my brain, but will need a crowbar to get them out.
Date: 2/8/2024 9:36:00 PM
Great imagery and message in this one, Hilda. Nice twist for the ending. Good poetry, my friend, thanks for sharing it with us. Bill
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/8/2024 9:44:00 PM
Thank you. I was concentrating on this goth style but lately, I've gotten away from it. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 1/11/2024 10:10:00 AM
A poem that probes great depths touching on meaningful matters philosophical. The symbolism of the fruit has a special resonance. A superb ending rounds this off. I’m most grateful for your complimentary words on Golden Gust Glow Howard
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/11/2024 10:12:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 9/21/2023 12:16:00 PM
This is a very well written poem Hilda with lovely imagery. Didn’t see the ending coming! Great writing.Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 9/22/2023 2:22:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 9/21/2023 10:06:00 AM
Deep and creative word weaving. That ending is so good! Loved the flow of this and how descriptive it is. Pleasure reading you
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 9/22/2023 2:23:00 PM
Thank you.

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