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As Always, With Chagrin

Dark hair in ringlets softly frames her face,
the style her mother likes to see her wear,
and her new gown looks pretty trimmed in lace
while near the wall, she occupies a chair.

She gazes at a crowd of boys and girls -
the boys, like small men, dressed in shirts and ties;
the girls, like her, dolled up, their hair in curls.
What thoughts might lie behind her dark jade eyes?

Young women not yet asked to dance have flocked
together. Seeing her, they burst into
a fit of giggles. Is she being mocked?
She drops her gaze, unsure of what to do.

Her hope, a tiny bird, away has flown.
As always, with chagrin, she sits alone.

Posted Aug. 7, 2017  for Ever Roper's "She Sits Alone" Poetry Contest
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Michaels Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 10:57 AM
Sad and evocative piece, Andrea. Well-deserved congratulations on First Place! Regards, John.
Walker Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 8:50 AM
I feel like you were writing about me. That's how I felt at dances. Not a great way to feel. You captured this so well and I know you were never one to be sitting alone.
Smith Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 8:30 AM
Back for your pat on the back, congratulations Andrea...
Sergi Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 7:57 PM
Hi Andrea: Skillfully done. Reminds me of my sister 0n one of her cotillons.
Sergi Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 7:55 PM
Skillfully done, Andrea! Reminds me of my cistern one of those cotillons
Sergi Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 7:55 PM
Skillfully done, Andrea! Reminds me of my cistern one of those cotillons
Cozart Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 10:24 AM
As soon as I'd read your line, 'Her hope, a tiny bird, away has flown', I thought you'd probably be a winner. Also, in your Shadow Poet poem you might have an extra 'shall' in your sixth line. Congrats on your top win!
Lawless Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 8:06 AM
"What thoughts might lie behind her dark jade eyes?". A rip tide line shift that pulls you away into the loneliness. Congrats on the top spot
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 11:01 PM
Very pretty! Congrats Andrea!
Roper Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 8:17 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Andrea. Love the setting you have created. Like always very well-crafted poem with, fantastic flow and rhyme. Congratulations on your win. ~*
May Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 7:42 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
Canerdy Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 7:25 PM
How beautiful, skillfully-written--and sad! People can be so mean. Congrats on your win. Janice
Sands Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 6:05 PM
Congratulations Andrea :)
Johnson Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 5:43 PM
Congrats on your fine win.
Ashley Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 5:37 PM
Hi Andrea, a beautiful and heartfelt sonnet. Congratulations on your win!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 2:30 PM
Adolescence is such a difficult time to endure. I can really relate to your girl Andrea. This poem has much colorful detail. I hope it is a high winner! : )
Babcock Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 12:38 PM
That makes me sad. No one should have to sit alone and deal with those growing pains. Nicely written. love phyl
Horsman Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 9:50 AM
Sooo sad,yet so powerful, this an emotion that will have touch many..as for those dark jade eyes well the mind boggles? i must look more closely next time....
Daniel Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 11:41 PM
Sad and touching, Andrea, should place high:)
Sathasivam Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 6:49 AM
Excellent and very touching write. But sad too. Thanks for sharing it.
Dufresne Avatar
August 10, 2017 at 6:27 AM
a beautiful poem framed in reality of growing pains. Very well done Andrea I feel it Bob D
Smith Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 8:43 PM
Sadness percolates...I feel for her...a beautiful poem for the picture.
Warrior Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 6:16 PM
You verse sits alone...1'st place that is...god bless...^WW^
Kannan Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 9:31 AM
Beautiful interpretation Andrea... Loved it... Good luck with the contest...
Cwiak Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 8:39 AM
I wish I had the talent to write such sonnets, but alas, I am only a poor poet unlike the one who wrote the above. Thank you, Andrea, for giving us a standard to follow.
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