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As a Fool

I love you But I want to love you more Like the broth of sea washes the shore In love for the oysters. I am bland Still I play on the beach sand Like a torn silk of wonder in the fringes In love for the stardust. You call me fool But I will wait for you Like a honey bird waits for first rain In love for her babies. I love I will love As a fool.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/16/2015 12:14:00 PM
I am in love with your lines... This is a great piece and I hope to spend more time on your other works. Thank you for the incredible share
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Date: 2/7/2015 10:35:00 PM
Wow, now thats romantic, great write!
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/8/2015 4:56:00 AM
Lovely comments Arthur.God bless..Rajat
Date: 2/7/2015 8:57:00 AM
Beautiful and romantic! The line "like a torn silk of wonder in the fringes" is fantastic!
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/7/2015 11:18:00 AM
Hi Monterey. How're you? God bless my lovely friend...your friend Rajat
Date: 2/7/2015 6:47:00 AM
lovely...love a torn silk of wonder in the fringes...Tim
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 2/7/2015 11:17:00 AM
Love Tim. God bless.

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