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" A PEACEFUL HARBOR " MY PHOTO, ©

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As a-battered-by-the-storm ship Desperately seeks a peaceful harbor to find So A wondering mind, lost in a sea of opinions Strives with truth to be realigned! © Demetrios Trifiatis 04 April 2019

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David Smith

Date: 4/7/2019 10:49:00 PM

Always find something new to ponder in your musings Demetrius. I am half way through my chemo with no real side effects. Fingers crossed I can stand for Mayor again and get E-scooters off our footpaths to give blind and visually impaired hope. None of us are sprite as we think. Best regards David in NZ

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/8/2019 2:23:00 AM

I hope your health is improving and you are as good as new. I pray you be as strong as before and to win over the elections! Myself, too, runs for the European Parliament! Even I have posted a poem you may find interesting : Defending Democracy. You might like it for I explain what Democracy is all about! God bless you! Take care of yourself dear, David!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/6/2019 1:18:00 PM

This is so true. Well done Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/8/2019 2:19:00 AM

Thank you dearest, MLK!

Eve Roper

Date: 4/4/2019 12:02:00 PM

I try to depend on God to decipher the true meaning of what is false and truth for me. Very good verse my friend and the photo is just lovely

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/4/2019 1:07:00 PM

Of, course my dear, Eve. God is TRUTH , aligning ourselves with the truth we align ourselves with God! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/4/2019 12:00:00 PM

- Sometimes we need a peaceful place to gather our thoughts ... just be you / (me) and nature ... a wonderful poem, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/4/2019 1:11:00 PM

My dearest friend Anne-Lise how precious your visit! Thank you so much! Hugs xxx

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 4/4/2019 10:58:00 AM

Very thoughtful, D. Your picture is like one I imagine when I can't sleep at night and need to quiet down. signed "The Battered Ship."

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/4/2019 1:10:00 PM

Happy you like d the picture my dearest, Sunlite. I love this place and visit it often! Thank you!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/4/2019 9:47:00 AM

Nice work, speaks volumes. BG

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/4/2019 10:10:00 AM

Thank you Barbara. I appreciate your visit!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/4/2019 7:20:00 AM

Your photo looks peaceful and serene..like truth always is. Well written poem my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/4/2019 10:09:00 AM

It is peaceful and serene my friend, Vijay! It is a beautiful spot that I visit often and during summer I swim and go to an open movie theater there! Very beautiful. It is also a beautiful spot to see the moon rising out of the sea! Thank you!

Ann Gilmour

Date: 4/4/2019 3:26:00 AM

Oh such wise words dear Demetrious but it is often so difficult to become realigned with so many opinions whirling around in ones mind. You always instil such peace and tranquility with your poetry - thank you so much, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/4/2019 6:58:00 AM

True dearest, Ann but I said to realign with the truth! Thank you for your gracious words!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/4/2019 2:46:00 AM

With so much fake news and half truths out there it's difficult sometimes to find out what is really the truth, but we form our opinions on what sort of person we are and the life we lead. Then we have found our safe harbour. Love the picture, is it Myrtos beach by any chance? Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/4/2019 3:53:00 AM

Appreciated your ...second coming dear, TOM! Lol!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/4/2019 3:06:00 AM

Oh I love your wise words too Demetrios, you always speak ( or should I say write ) the truth.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/4/2019 2:49:00 AM

It is close to Athens! You love the picture my friend YET nothing about the poem..hahaha! Thank you for liking the picture though.Lol