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Artistic Freedom In the Wild

There are no shape walls to bridle one's emotions creativity is properly ventilated unbound by meter or syllable count embracing nakedness yanked naked in its virginity The binding belt of chastity given over to lyrical lovers Sleeping quietly in the meadows a pristine area free of squatters fighting for their rights with sonnet-crafted homes and hamlets defined by literature. Straying away from the norm acolytes watch as castles are built, that worships orderly expression poetic masterpieces, safeguarded and preserved at all times metaphors align into a specific subset pictures look like works of art, there is a distinct realm for those unfit to fly in their confines. Outside of the norm is a vast nebulous growing quill flowers from seeds sown the power of smell to evoke memories, which one's brain may elect to ignore when settling at a location of a specific form is what one's words must imply. On this trip, there are no rules, only that burning desire inside  strive to harass the page, fire getting into the core from telling someone a mystery, till the key bares the chest where other ideas demand rebirth.
1st Place Contest Winner Written: August 28, 2022 Free Verse - Old Or New Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May 5th Place Contest Winner A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand
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Mccann Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 1:02 AM
I'm absolutely on board with Bill here! Thank you for the ticket to ride! Elizabeth
Baker Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 2:50 PM
Congratulations on the win, Lasaad. This was a beautiful example of why Free Verse became a major form of poetry. Allowing ones emotions and intellect to flow freely in an uncharter form can cause an artist to feel euphoric. The reader on the other hand is given the opportunity to to flow with the rhythm of the chosen words and emotions. I enjoy the read my dear friend. Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 7:18 AM
pictures look like works of art…congratulations, Sotto!
Sands Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 2:22 PM
Congratulations for your win :)
Fowler Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations on your win Lasaad! Linda
George Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 8:57 AM
Once more Congratulations on your great win in Brian Strand's Premiere Poetry Contest.
George Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 9:26 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved top win in the contest, dear Lasaad.
May Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 6:15 PM
No walls to stop this verse from flowing, Wonderful write Sotto, Congrats on your win
Pandit Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 6:01 AM
This is among your best poems, Lasaad. A FAVE from me for the artistic musings well delivered.
George Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 1:36 AM
"On this trip, there are no rules, only that burning desire inside strive to harass the page, fire getting into the core...". Yes, here we needn't be confined by rules. There are no boundary walls. Roam free in the world of imagination and fill the pages with verse. Beautiful...
Tor Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 7:34 PM
A depiction of lovers in this splendid Free Verse Lasaad. Enjoyed reading lots of wishes for the contest, my friend...
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