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Sunrise - Haiku

sunrise painting skies horizon's red streaks brush seas - water-coloring Susan Ashley August 31, 2017

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/30/2018 7:32:00 PM

I like your play on words and the mood you created with this piece.

Susan Ashley
Date: 1/30/2018 8:49:00 PM

Your visit is delightful, Rick.. Thank you for sharing your precious thoughts with me, as they are deeply appreciated, my friend.. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Paul Callus

Date: 11/28/2017 3:55:00 PM

The double reference to water-colouring has been noted, Susan...the medium used and the streaked sea water...an art in itself! Well done, my friend! Warm regards // paul

Susan Ashley
Date: 11/28/2017 9:18:00 PM

Paul, thank you for your wonderful comments. I appreciate your time to read my poem and leave your reflective thoughts. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Gail Debole

Date: 10/13/2017 6:45:00 AM

Perfect Title for a perfectly crafted image.

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/13/2017 1:27:00 PM

Thank you Gail for your kind and warmhearted words. I deeply appreciated your visit and lovely comment. ~ Susan

Niall Fulham

Date: 9/29/2017 1:03:00 PM

Hi Susan , your words painted the picture in my mind beautifully ::)))) hugs

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/29/2017 8:32:00 PM

Thank you so very much Niall. I'm so happy you enjoyed my poem! :)) hugs

Terry Shuff

Date: 9/18/2017 7:27:00 PM

makes me think of cruising ,being on deck at sunrise

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/18/2017 8:31:00 PM

Thank you so much Terry for your lovely comment and I hope you've had the pleasure of being on a cruise deck at sunrise! Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2017 5:40:00 PM

This is so COOL, Susan. Love it!

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/6/2017 6:03:00 PM

Hi Andrea, your comments and visits are always such a pleasure. Thank you so much for your kind words and congrats on your recent wins. Great writing! :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/1/2017 9:09:00 AM

Dipping brush stroke in the sea... Lovely haiku Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/5/2017 7:20:00 PM

Hi Joseph, thank you for your lovely comment and your visit. I always appreciate your reading your kind words :) Susan

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/31/2017 8:09:00 PM

Lovely show!

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/31/2017 8:22:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend. Your visits and wonderful comments are always SO apreciated! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/31/2017 7:04:00 PM

Monet couldn't have painted a more beautiful picture than in your haiku Susan:-) A little gem:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/31/2017 7:14:00 PM

Oh Jan, Claude Monet is my most favorite artist ever! I love impressionism and have had the pleasure of seeing his works at the Boston Fine Arts Museum multiple times. His paintings are SO amazing in real life! Thank you so much for your generous and wondrous comment. I appreciate it more than you can imagine! :))