Arrive Alive

That's not my elephant!
The big grey one, standing in the middle of the room.
That's not my elephant, is that what I was thinking,
What I was thinking when I let her leave?
I knew I shouldn't have let it happen; she should have stayed the night.
Ella, my dear friend Ella, gone all because I didn't have the guts to take her keys.

Back when we were little, just barely 2nd graders, 
We would to talk about how we would grow old together.
Best Friends Forever.
We would stay at each others places every night,
We has so much in common.
Favourite colour: purple, favourite number: 4, favourite food: spaghetti.

How would I, How could I let her leave when I knew her condition?
We had been drinking all night?
Why hadn't I remembered the bill of rights?
The First Amendment - Freedom of Speech.
Why was I afraid to talk?
Why hadn't I just said "you're staying the night"?

I have a pull out couch, where she could have stayed.
Even my bed, in which she could have laid.
Ella, my dear friend Ella, I will miss you forever,
and I'll never forget.
Next time a friend plans to drink and drive,
I'll take their keys or call a cab.
To make sure that unlike you, they'll
Arrive Alive.



For Matt Caliri's contest "That's Not My Elephant"
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Cowan Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 7:51 PM
no it is not a true story thankfully, but I do feel very deeply about this topic. My brother had 2 friends die due to drunk driving. So it's a semi personal subject that I feel strongly about. Thank you for the luck, but I do not think I will end up placing in the contest, there are too many amazing poets on this site. I just feel lucky enough to be a minor poet in amongst all the greatness PoetrySoup has to offer.
Whitlock-Ishway Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 7:48 PM
Hi Sierra, if these are true events you speak of I'm truly sorry for your loss. Good luck in the contest...Lay
Cowan Avatar
December 18, 2010 at 10:33 AM
Thank you! Glad you liked it! :)
Mehta Avatar
December 18, 2010 at 4:54 AM
Nice write, quite funny and humorous on elephant Ella, Sierra
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