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Tumbling through my mind a decaying leaf of brown demise inclinations of transition afire with each moment passing turning in dance a warm touch of a much awaited season

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/25/2011 6:16:00 PM
Congratulations on the ninth place win in the contest of debbie, Rick
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Date: 2/25/2011 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win ^Rick in Debbie's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2011 7:09:00 AM
Congrats Rick my friend on your great big win in the Japanese contest luv.. a super cool write from a super cool poet..luv..just posted my new blog ..hope u check it out.. explains much...
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Date: 2/24/2011 12:52:00 AM
super congrats for bagging a big win, rick.. awesome.:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/23/2011 9:56:00 PM
Very nicely won, Rick. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/23/2011 9:26:00 PM
Many congrats ^Rick on clinching big win in Debbie's contest. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 2/23/2011 8:05:00 PM
Lovely images thru words. many congrats.
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Date: 2/23/2011 10:56:00 AM
An intense write with nice metaphor!Congrats ^Rick on your well deserved win in the contest of Debbie!!
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Date: 2/16/2011 4:53:00 PM
Beautiful one, Rick!
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